Omg that’s so sad. Poor Steve and Kagome. I hope there is more to this story at some point. Really enjoyed reading what you’ve written.

I can see why you decided to re-write this after the direction it took, that is quite the corner.

But thank you for leaving this up! It is fun to have the imagination fired by even an incomplete story. And it shows writing changes over time.
Oh and as an absolute plus - makes it much easier to point off when a newer story is ripping off an old one (not that I'm saying that has happened here, but it is always potentially true as some people are just jerks and others need reminding that just because they forgot doesn't mean they hadn't read something that they then draw on in writing).

I'm off track though
So thank you again for sharing this!

Love it plz continue

would love to see another update this was well written by is awesome character development was creative really truly loved it

Omg this one was really awesome too.

Awww kagome and cap'n aren't dating! Why?! Damn you cruel world! This is great keep up tge awesome work!

I like this one so much more then like himself.T.T

Kagome is mouthy and arrogant? Too much time hanging around the Inu brothers.

Please update

Awww...poor Kagome :(

Aw:(
Maybe Inuyasha can help patch things up?:3

Awww, I'm sorry Kagome :(

UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN PLEASE!

Please download

please write some more. what happens next.