Uh oh that's bad

Funny!

Nice

Uh oh how though?

Hm i really like this story

Hm alrught

huh alright

interesting, please update soon. I started not to read this story because the summery sounded so over used, but I'm glad I did because it turned out to be a really good story.

Well that was a hell of a time skip. No idea what year it is at this point.

Ok, can not understand why she's crying, hope to find out in the next chapter.

man you fooled me big time! lol when she said it was just a dream i was like wtf nooooooo! :D good story anyways

oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, Im freaking out, wait thats it im dead until you write the next chapter.

i am soooooo confused is this the same story or is it two stories and where did jack go? agh now i have a headache

Ohh no bad choice 'me'! No Pitch has you! Agh!

Hm... looks interesting. However, I highly suggest that u should label the story as ReaderXJack Frost, since I found "the character" confusing. U should b more specific when listing pairings.