He just booped the snoot of his stalkee lmao

'Hi. I'm just your average creepy invisible stalker who knows everything about you. I also happen to be an all powerful deity of winter. Excuse me while I boop your nose.' XD I'm actually really disappointed that there aren't more chapters here. (Even though you promised there would be more. XP) I suppose I'll just have to appreciate what you've given and imagine for myself what happens next. :)

I guess you have been kind of convinced otherwise since you didn't post anymore chapters and it's such a shame :'(

I really like the way you describe Jack internals thoughts, it is pretty emotional and "bittersweet", especially the last paragraph, it was wonderful :')

Hmmm... So that's how all that 'Jack Frost nipping at your nose' thing started? This was cute. Poor Jack, having to only watch him...

Is this a one shot? Please tell me it isnt...

Jack is such a creeper XD

Awesome! i love it! don't stop!

This is insanely good! I like the style of writing you chose to use in this, a POV inside a character's head with their speech patterns in each sentence? Very creative! There are so many ways that could have gone wrong, but you're doing phenomenal!

Keep going! I have high hopes for this :)

This is wonderful. The language is very fluid and the situation believable. I feel Jack is speaking in character and it's very easy to visualize what's happening. This is my favourite characterization of Jack so far in fiction. Please continue, I look forward to more of this.

Lol, I love it! I always imagined that creatures like Jack would occasionally get attached to a person or an animal that tickled their fancy and follow them/it around for wont of anything else to do. I hope you continue this!

Ahhhh! I love it! You promised more, right? I. Cannot. Wait. I've never seen a meeting like this before and I'm excited to see where you take it! :)
Update when you can!

Super cute! Please keep posting!

Aw. This is too cute! Are you going to continue it?

This is really interesting I'd love to see more of it.

This crossover story you've started is brilliant! I really love the whole concept you've come up with for this. Based on this first chapter, you've got the makings of a truly great story here - one that's taken a lot of time and effort to create. I really love your story writing style! The way you write this story is so entertaining and interesting to read. The characters are all strong and true to the original versions, and their actions and interactions feel natural and true. Your sentence structure is strong and engaging, and your descriptions help set the scene perfectly. Your dialogue is really well written - perfectly capturing the expressions and emotions of the moment while staying true to the characters.

Hiccup's reactions to what happened were brilliant - so well written and so true to how he would normally react given what was happening. He was one of the reasons I loved How To Train Your Dragon so much (it was my favourite film of all time, until Guardians came along) and I love how you've written him in this story.

And Jack Frost, who is now probably my all-time favourite movie character ever, was so strongly written in this - you really managed to capture the soul of the winter spirit with this, and the loneliness he must have felt back before he became a guardian. I can see a lot of possibilities between these two for the future of this story, even if they're only ever friends - as they just seem so perfect for each-other.

Sorry this review is so short - but it's 3am here in the UK right now, and I'm too tired to write any more. But I couldn't just leave this story without a single review as you deserve better! I look forward to seeing where you take this story from here, and eagerly await any new chapters... :)