I loved this! Thank you, I'd love to see more of Hermione riddle (soon to be Malfoy ).

I wouldn't mind if you did more chapters, maybe a prequel chapter to how she discovers she's Hermione Riddle? Great fic.

eu amei cada segundo desse momento. esta tudo lindo e doce.
eles foram simplesmente perfeito juntos.
ela era brilhante e esta brilhante entre os seus iguais. eles são doce e perfeito juntos.

This is a interesting plot! I'd love to see more!

That was awesome, i loved it

Loved it

And here I was thinking it was going to be a dark fic, and it ended up fluffy in the end. Oh well. I think for Dramione, you wrote this well. I'm not a huge fan of good characters switching sides... it irks me a little, because they end up OOC (obviously) and I'm not a fan of OOCness.

But, your writing was fairly good. Just remember grammar - commas after speech and lowercase letters.

I did enjoy the snarkiness! That was well done.

I don't normally read Draco/Hermione fiction, but this one was written really well. Despite the fact that this seems to be set in a Voldemort-won AU, and Hermione is Hermione Riddle, it's a very sweet romance story.

However, I did find that a few things weren't explained properly. Hermione only lets Harry and Ron know about her heritage in fifth/sixth year (presumably only some time after she finds out), but there is a reference made to her being given her childhood memories. This seems to imply that her memories were wiped, but that is not clear. Also, the fact that Voldemort was teaching Hermione magic while he was supposed to floating around as a spirit without a body is also confusing.

Apart from these things, the story was very well written, and I do hope you continue it! Maybe you can clarify these issues in later chapters if you do continue. I would also like to see Harry and Ron's reactions to Hermione becoming friends with the Slytherins...I'd love it if you continue with this AU!

Ooooh :D I love love love love stories like these. That you managed to give a compelling story of this sort as a one-shot is amazing. Brilliantly done!

Thank you for the Christmas present! Have a Happy New Year!

This was definitely a new territory for me. But it was extremely well written and well thought out. I found myself enjoying this. While I'm not a fan of flashbacks in the middle of the story, you carried them out nicely. And Draco was really in character. Hermione was interesting. I like the characterization of the "new" her. Though, admittedly, I would've liked to understand how Hermione found out Tom Riddle was her father.

Overall, nicely done!

This is not the type of fic I'll search out deliberately, but I really, really enjoyed immersion in the world you've created here. It's interesting, engaging. Well developed. Actually realistic — because I can see this kind of heritage losing a lot of trust. Very well done.

Overall, very nice. Thanks for your entry!

I enjoyed it, well done

as promised, here i am! this was very odd for me to read, because i don't fully understand your portrayal of hermione.

it's a little fluffy, a little angsty, and i liked how you spread the emotions. what i would recommend, however, is to spend more time on the thought emotions rather than action details. you describe a lot of action stuff, less passive, when i feel like you should have a better balance between them.

Love it! It's interesting and different :) I'm always up for anything dramione x) how bout a sequel aye?