Oh, this story really makes me excited, you know, all those stuff, the MI6, James Bond and M, wow, this is going to be a very potential one. Compare to the first fanfic, your skills of describing and explaining TF's past also great! Hope updates will be soon!

1st chap wuz actually pretty touching, but u blew the 2nd chap b/c ur referring 2 jams bond WAAAAYYYY too much man
like the thhing w/ace tho

So yeah, update

O.O... o...m...g... very nice twist! i was thinkin of some OC but this is much better! may the drama BEGIN!
an pls update soon! 3

Omg this is TOO CUTE! I actually like it! At first i thought it was gonna be eh. But no! Its acutally gettin interestin! Pls update!

Nice story

NIce one

Yeah...time for some action.

Be sure to slow the down the pacing a bit alright? Setting up the stage is important for just about any piece of entertainment.

Well, first, thanks for reviewing, I appreciate you taking the time, and I'm glad you're interested so far.

But I'd just like to say that Twisted Fate was never mentioned as having magical powers so far in the story, and Ace was mentioned as having real magical ability despite his underwhelming use of it in magic shows. But let me know if there's too much ambiguity and I'll try to clear it up.

Also, if putting the flashbacks in italics wasn't clear enough, what are some suggestions to make it stand out a bit more?

Hello i like your story so far. If i may , i will point some things you might want to consider .
1
You don't explain how twisted fate got his magic powers ,Ace was a stage magician -performer but that doesn' t make him a spellcaster, when i read about him i thought he was making small magic tricks that had some logical explanation .
2. You are jumping between the scenes mixing the past and the present, which is really confusing. You might want to put a symbol before we change scene an maybe but all the flashbacks together. This way you dont stop the action. I had no idea when i joined but there are people in this site called betareaders, wonderfull people who can check the text , fix grammar mistakes and help you improve your writting. I am not trying to give you any negative feelings , just trying to help , the story seems interesting and would like to see what happens next . Happy new year and have a nice day.

Excellently written. Contains minor hiccups in form of misspellings and grammatical errors.

Character of Twisted Fate handled well; exposition concerning his past believable.