Reviews for A New Sunrise |
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HaruhiandHikaru chapter 19 . 5/6 I’m extremely sad for the ending... it was an amazing story and My only complaint is I’m sad to see it end. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
ichigohaatsu chapter 19 . 8/7/2018 It was good and then it got really rushed near the last 6 chapters or so. Good for a one time read. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2016 Could you go back through this story? I remember reading it before the revision and fell in love, this story was my favorite of all inuyasha crossovers, but then when I reread it after the revision it was like you just took random sentences out and it didn't make sense as a first timer anymore. I still knew what was going on, but new readers would have no idea |
Oceans Night chapter 19 . 9/3/2016 Okay I have finally finished! I have to say that I loved this story sooo much! Some parts were a bit muddled and clumsily written so it could use some editing but the heart of the story is there. I hope you keep writing because I feel like you have a lot of potential. Ja |
Oceans Night chapter 14 . 9/3/2016 I am really getting into this story but I wont leave a proper review until I get to the latest chapter. I just wanted to say that I almost thought you were going to have Sesshomaru turn up when the fan club was at the shrine hahah. Still I can't wait to see how everything pans ou t JA |
Shi No Mo No Tenshi chapter 7 . 8/27/2016 Major grammar and grammar tense errors along with missing words in sentences through out the entire story... However, other than those problems the story is pretty good |
natkyolee chapter 3 . 6/2/2016 Kagomes behaviour is little wild n aggressive like uotani |
animecutylover chapter 1 . 5/1/2016 Omg! That was a good read. :D |
roroiine chapter 19 . 4/21/2016 I thought that this story was going to be good, but it turned out to be poorly written and just jumped all over the place never sticking to a plot. Maybe revise this and repost, because you've got a good idea but no order. Just chaos. Sorry. |
Angel Winx chapter 1 . 3/21/2016 It's Kyoko Honda, not Kyoto Honda |
Guest chapter 19 . 3/12/2016 haha. Yuki in a dress. XD |
Undertheskys chapter 19 . 11/21/2015 Yuki acticpve in bed huh |
Lilith Strome chapter 19 . 10/27/2015 aww this is sooo sweet! |
ritzkiaprilia chapter 19 . 8/9/2015 Wow, beautiful ending :3 Loved your story XD btw, is the Sohmas (Yuki, Kyo, etc) know about Kagome's past in the Feudal Era? and is Yuki know about Kagome's adopted son (aka Shippo)? and isn't that Kagome want become a Doctor not a nurse, right? |
ritzkiaprilia chapter 18 . 8/9/2015 Wow, poor Akito :( Hope Kagome will help her again hmm, btw why do you repeat scene when Yuki get that dog stuff animal with the pink bow and scene when Yuki give Kagome a necklace? and where is Josh? you never mention him again |