Reviews for Phoenix Rising
BlackJackBJ chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Please update soon..
master1527 chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
continue it has potential
AKA99 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Its not that bad but how come harry wasn't hailed as much as mike was, he got the scar
shugokage chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Interesting story!
jenn008 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Update soon!
hotkillerz chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
can't wait for more, hope its a little longer, tough
beatshield chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Id have to daybim looking for more keep it up mate
SassMaster8497 chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
i have nothing to say jut keep writing and make another chapter
Grey Daughter chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Sounds good so far.

About how to improve, I prefer fics written in the past, not present. Because well, if someone is telling a story, this story has already happened. Also, longer chapters.

I'm waiting for more!
RMWatanabe chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Like the idea and can't wait to read more. Just one question did Harry get a scar to or was it only Mike that got the lighting scar?