| Reviews for Mafia World |
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Kasia chapter 2 . 4/20/2016 Don't make us wait too long. I hate waiting. |
sisimiura chapter 2 . 6/16/2014 Awwwww its really nice to see and another acexluffy fanfic make me happy... thsnks |
anonymous chapter 2 . 7/20/2013 Are you going to update this? It's a really good story. Will you do that VampireAu you mentioned. I hope you update soon, until next chapter, bye bye. |
jibegajima chapter 2 . 5/17/2013 Oh my god where are you? Please update this! I like the plot a lot! Them as a mafia gang? LOVE IT! There are so many questions pondering in my head. Only your update that can answer them |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2013 Best. Fic. Evaa i'm soo liking this! please update soon, awesome person :) |
Pokabu chapter 2 . 3/8/2013 Nice chapter! But poor Ace. Luffy is confusing him quite a bit, huh? And Bon-chan! I wonder what will happen next! |
Pokabu chapter 1 . 3/8/2013 Oh, gosh the Straw Hats. xD They are dorks, but they are lethal dorks. |
anonymous chapter 2 . 1/9/2013 I love this story. Hope you update soon! Oh and if you do write the Vampire!AU and the Pet!AU I'll read them only if they are AceLu stories. Sorry I love that pairing. In the Pet!AU will Luffy be part human and part cat or just a cat? |
noah-adryen-20 chapter 2 . 1/8/2013 This is really an interesting story. And in a way, it is similar to the manga and anime, because there too it's hard to decide exactly which side is the good one. Though I must admit, Luffy, Kid and Sabo being brothers surprised me, but it's interesting! :D And I'm glad Sabo is there. :D My fav pair in OP is KidxLaw so for that I can't wait! :D And Luffy's character is really cute, just as easily accepting as in the manga. And cutely childlish :D And at the end Bon-chan! :D Can't wait for next chapter! |
MeikoKuran999 chapter 2 . 1/6/2013 lol nice please update soon. |
XxSaorixX chapter 2 . 1/3/2013 Ace trying to flirt with Luffy? Idk why I felt that moment when Ace purred to Luffy was a bit... awkward, maybe because of the fact that he's new in the crew, he's with the police and he's not sure if Luffy would feel comfortable with that, LOL But it would be interesting to see how they will develope feeling for each other x3 And Bon-chan! Bon-chan is in this fic! It makes me so happy x3! I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see what happens :3! |
MatchboxLuffy chapter 2 . 1/2/2013 ahh! Bon Clay . I love Bon Clay, hes my favorite gay guy. I like the details like how Sabo is alive and kid and him are Luffy's sworn brothers ; I hope you contine writing :D |
azab chapter 2 . 1/2/2013 i loved it a lot hope to see some of ace and law past too |
XxSaorixX chapter 1 . 12/23/2012 Where's the "next chapter" botton!? D: I'll have to wait then ;_; Btw, I like the theme of this fic, hope you update soon n.n |
MatchboxLuffy chapter 1 . 12/21/2012 Ah! I really loved this a lot! It's well writen and I hope you update it. Thanks for making it :3 |