Aw! A nice add on to the episode.

Really enjoyed this story too. You get into Cath's mind so well. And this is completely I think the rest of their night should after been after that fade to black. Great job.

Really great!

This was adorable. Some good cath steve romance. It was a perfect little amount of added detail. Good job.

That was so sweet. I loved it.! Just an FYI. Catherine said she lost her virginity in the backseat of a corvette...Corvettes don't have backseats. ;-).

wow well done

Awwww, that was really great. Love Catherine's POV of the episode.

Loved this, great concept. So cute. Thanks for writing Steve/Cath fics.

Sweet! How great this is! Too bad the show didn't do this!

got asked you something where mama McGarrett while this is going on?

lovely story, thanks for writing and sharing