A worthy epilogue to a great story. I love how you painted their relationship in the end, and how true to them it was. Because, really, could Arthur and Merlin ever coeist peacefully with no arguing? No, of course not. It's been a great read, thank you!

Emma

Aww, they're married. :) A lovely epilogue. :)

That was really lovely. I'm glad Hunith was so calm. And of course the Merhur part... I have no words for it. *_* The end of the chapter feels like the end of the story... Is it?

Very pleased that Hunith came through as a mother who truly loved her son. The emotions evoked in Arthur's actions with Merlin were well written, true loving instead of mechanical sex. Your story has progressed very well, the characters and relationship are believably presented. Thanks for taking the time to write. Any chance of a sequel chapter?

Yay - closure! I really enjoyed the scene between Merlin and Hunith, and the fact that it was Balinor who had pointed out to her the damage that her attitude had caused. Candles - always a classy show of romance! I thought that this was the ending, as the final part of the chapter felt like a really well done conclusion, but saw that you haven't marked it as complete, so am assuming that there is more to come! Looking forward to it if so.

Emma

Oh dear... It rather hurts to read. Not because of your writing style - that's excellent! - but because of Merlin and Arthur hurting. You know, when your real life sucks it's hard to read a story with so much drama...

great update :)

A mother on the warpath is the epitome of trouble. Let's hope that she loves him enough to at least hear him out. Story is moving along nicely looking forward to the next update.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Oh shit... I hope Merlin and Arthur can make it. I actually felt sorry for Arthur in this chapter! Damn...

I LOVE THIS! It is so wonderful and mildly tragic.

My sense of impending doom has just intensified! I have a horrid feeling Merlin is going to get the backlash for this... although, that might bring our wayward boys back together, yeh?! (Wishful thinking!)

Emma

I still don't like this situation...
And it can get worse if Arthur doesn't tell Merlin what he did.

Ah... why do I have a feeling it's going to get much worse? I really wanted to smack Arthur, because two wrongs don't make a right and all that. Still - he got his commupence when Uther turned up! I'm on tenterhooks wondering what will happen next!

Emma

Oh dear. I usually stop reading when one of the characters cheats - even if it wasn't premeditated - but I've enjoyed this so far so I'll stick with. Interested to see what Arthur has to say, and how Merlin justifies himself.

Emma