This is probably the best Fate and Sekirei crossover ever. I completely agree with your reflection at the very end. I think what I have come enjoy the most about Fate crossovers is that the stakes and depth of the other story get suddenly pumped up, and you did so excellently. I hope you have a pattern account, because I’m about to go look for it to donate.

Pretty good story. Ending kinda unsatisfying with all the lose ends but not bad

Awesome story. Loved it. I had to favorite this after u mentioned my favorite symphony. I listened to the 4th movement during the fight

I wanted to know a little more in the epilogue like of what about Karasuba? Please tell me!

But also a solution for Matsu, as it is is too cruel, it is almost as she was rejected. She could die of loneliness... I hope you can tell me she had a better ending. Even if is only with a baby from Shirou and being a mother make her happy.

I love what you did for Homura I always find it distasteful that he had to change his sex against his will. Here he turned more manly and it was hilarious and awesome, because his bond with Shirou is great, he had a caring and supporting relationship with him so that bond is full filled and he found love also.

That’s why poor Matsu is so sad in comparison she had nothing, not even friendship. Please can you give her something...

I love all the fighting it was sad the death of so many sekirei but the were at war, a real one for survival, and no one told them until it was a little too late.

I love that Minaka tried to redeem himself, but I think is too easy they found how to save him, he wanted to be a tragic hero and I think he deserve that.

I wonder what happened with poor 107?

Finally i love your Shirou and his reality marble and his origin. Amazing!

Bueno transformaste esta historia en una basura cuando llevaste a Rin y Sakura en la historia, estoy fuera

No me gusta la estupida amistad entre shirou y rin y menos que halla aparecido en la historia

Thank you for the enjoyable story and all the work you put into writing it to completion. I'm happy with how things ended and the interactions along the way. I would definitely recommend anyone looking at the reviews to decide if it's worth reading to give it a chance.

Wow, I have to say that I honestly avoided this like the plague when I saw "Shirou Kotomine Tokisada" as the main lead. Not that Fate Apocrypha is bad or anything, it's just that it was less about character development than it was flashy fight scenes that make Servants even more insane than they already were. That and once I really started digging into the Fate series as a whole I realized that there was just so much untapped potential, mainly in the Tsukihime and original Fate stories.

So when I thought that this was Apocrypha-ish with this being Amakusa Shirou I immediately put it on my backburnner. 270K words be damned! I would only read this when I was absolutely out of options... and lo and behold six months later I've literally read every Fate story of more than questionable quality with 20K words or more... and that includes every crossover that caught my attention and more!

Sekirei was one of them... I had no idea what the show was until I started reading In-Flight, and it opened up a whole world to me. Granted it's 1st rate harem trash, but I'm all about some decent harem trash. After looking into Sekirei as a whole I began to realize that it was a heaping waste of potential, and soon learned that the vast majority of fanfictions out there do more to give the Sekirei they're due... with plot and character development, as individuals and as a whole.

In fact it inspired me to begin work on my own Sekirei work, and boy do I hope that I have the willpower to finish it!

I just wanted to say that this story was far more than the some of its parts, and despite how dark it got (the twisting of the Sekirei was one that didn't sit well with me... GOOD JOB!) I thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter. The scenes unfolded in my mind as I read them out, and it was very well done!

My only complaint would be Matsu and Kazehana's treatment, though granted Shirou is different... but I would of thought that Nero would have done a more thorough job in convincing him that as her Praetor that he deserved a vast, wonderful harem that rivaled the very Gods themselves!

For Rome! For Shirou! For harems!

Now I will go check out what else you've got written, because even if it's half of the quality of this one, then they'll be sure to be good reads! :)

(You're probably looking at this review like... "I finished this story years ago... someone's still reviewing?")

What I don’t like is the way Shirou treats Matsu and Kazehana.

Look skyward and despair.

UH. But Rin did just admit that she just got slave to do understand said slave better. Still pretty fucked up. Shirou is not being unreasonable for chewing her out.

...Well the real reason he became a priest is pretty dark, so I enjoyed that line immensely. Kirei is straight, the craziest bastard ever. But I love 'em.

Oh... is that Sakura? That's good. I really hoped she would be... you know... dewormed. Hope she get all the love she can take without exploding into sugar and everything nice.

I am in severe deficiency of 'Umu'.

Technically, they do not use 'magic'. They use magecraft. We all know what 'True Magic' is so I will save the lecture.