Thoroughly enjoyed this story. I like the blurring of the old lives and new, and the heaviness of fate pulling the characters together time and again. Such intriguing possibilities.
Have you put up the alternate story elsewhere?

chapter 1 - richtig fluchen...schwören means to promise sth
ach nein danke sehr - ah no please very much
chapter 2 -Du kannst nichts weg sein ! Ich habe dich schon einmal verloren und verdammt sei ich wenn ich es noch einmal tue. Komm verdammt noch mal wieder her, Eamonn!

i really like the story :) soooo epic

native speaker :D its Ich liebe dich, mein Schatz. leibe is the same as Leib ans that means body :D

I'm kinda sad that this isn't going to continue as fanfiction, because it has the hallmarks of a damn fine one.
Thanks for sharing what you have and good luck on turning it to pure fiction.

Fascinating take on their past. I wonder what happened to Eommon?

Okkay honestly my eyes watered while reading Grimmjow and Ichigo and then them getting emotional over Eamonn and Gunter. Ugh so heart wrenching. Amazing story even if it was two chapters. I think it would have been an awesome long story, but it was just as good so short. Great job C:
May

This couple - their past lives - make me laugh more than their current ones. I dunno why, exactly. I'm thinking it might be a good sign toward your future saleability for the book this has inspired for you. :D Do let me know when (or if, I suppose) you get it published.

wow I do love this idea. I'm very interested in your story...the non fanfiction one. good job. C:

What is your story called? i'll look it up on DA.

loved it

Is there more coming?

Yes! This is amazing, and it's only the first chapter! I love the concept, the past-life histories and heritage, the emotion, the present timeline, AND the fact you brought it back to that scene from the manga (where we all pretty much know) that Grimmjow has returned! I am gushing right now and just can't wait for the next chapter and to see where you go with this and how it will evolve. I also can't wait to find out why Grimmjow became a Hollow when, from what we have read so far, he seemed to accept his death after saving his love. I also wanna learn why his hair is blue now, and if that was just a product of evolution as a Hollow. Not to mention when/if Ichigo will remember his past life with Grimmjow as well! So much to cover, and I can't wait for more! XD

ROFLMAO The botched Scottish accent there is just too funny. I think you've both done a wonderful job with the accents. Sad, but also funny piece. Great short story. Thanks for sharing. *grins*

what a great start! TLC

So good, had a little tear at the tunnel collapse, hope there is more D

This was a very good idea. Are you going to continue the story? I hope so. Good job!