please come back, this is a master piece. Honestly its been years since i firs read it. Way back when you put out the first chapter, and the possibilities still haunt me to this day. I know my review is probably mute to you at this point, but ease, I'm begging you...give me some closure with this fic. I thank you for all you have already given, but im human...just like anyone else.

These last two chapter have been sitting in my inbox for over a year. I used to like this story so much I held off on reading them so it wouldn’t be over so quickly. I hope you find the will and time to finish this story one day. I know I’ll always come back to it.

Intriguing plot and character development! While reading your story, I found myself conflicted at times because Harry's morality is extremely questionable throughout the chapters, especially the consistent lying he does and manipulations he uses, not to mention the many facades he puts on. Your Harry truly reminds me of the Dark Lord in some chapters. Excited to see where you will take your story next. I'm hoping you're still working on it and updating when you can.

Before I start reading, I just wanted to say I love your profile pic.
Hakuouki doesn’t get the credit it should

Oh I am so curious how will you continue this. I like the relationship between Harry and Voldemort, but there is no potential for anything like happy end, so I am really curious.

So - will Harry have Parsel abilities? He wasn't marked as in canon. But some stories have a ancestor link to the Peverells where THEY also spoke parseltongue.

Storia complessa e un contorta. Harry camina sempre sul filo del rasoio. Grade storia è grande scrittore

Diciamo che finora Harry ha un bel po’ di problemi e la storia sembra abbastanza angosciante, ma è scritta in maniera favolosa, è intelligente coinvolgente che tutto il resto passa da contorno. Non so come spiegarlo. Ho letto i primi due capitoli con entusiasmo non per il contenuto ma per il modo in cui poni la storia. Una scrittura eccezionale. Complimenti

Btw, in the first chapter, you mentioned blast-ended skrewts. I'm not sure how Hagrid's timeline works in your story, but the skrewts were experimental creatures created by Hagrid during the fourth book. When Harry was a baby, it is probably unlikely that the skrewts existed then... So I'm not sure they should be referenced in that scene. But again, I don't know your timeline and it isn't the biggest issue.

Also, a criticism of the first chapter... If Harry was only a year old or so, he really shouldn't have had that vocabulary and speech or emotional intelligence. He seemed like a 6 year old.

Beyond that, I'm enjoying reading so far!

Really enjoying this fanfic. Update soon!

This is awesome! It's getting so good! I wonder... is this mysterious leader Neville? You changed Harry, and Harry's counterpart, the other prophecy child, is Neville. Plus, he hasn't show up yet, so he's probably due for an appearance. Is there a prophecy in this? Just because Voldemort never found out about it, doesn't mean it can't exist. Although, with him controlling the Ministry, he's bound to know wether or not a prophecy about him exists.

Thank you for writing and sharing this! I hope to read a lot more soon. Good luck in your writing!

I'm so glad you're continuing this fic! I love it so much and it just keeps getting better!

keep it up. this story is amazing

Great story, please update soon.

update soon