Reviews for Offshore
Kyattogaaru chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Ot was absolutely sweet and fluffy, and i love you for this goodness!
Nella Moonblood Royalle chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
Gah love tis cho much... Adowable!
melode chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I totally love your story. You have a great idea here, and the world you described is great. Poetic. And fun. Kanda made me laugh a few times, when he goes straight to the point, without considering anything or anyone.
I want to award you a special thanks for the pace of your story. Not too fast, quiet, and letting Allen get the time he needs to adjust.
A very big thank you (with hugs if you want them), because your story made my day, and I'm very glad to get to read it.
Nessie002 chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
aww, that was sweet and had a good plot :)
hananotsuki hime chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Cross is a mafia leader? Nice! The cat scratched him for no reason? That’s cold! I kind of figured Kanda was the cat, lol…but why would he randomly come and use shoddy persuasive skills to get Allen away from the bar? As far as Allen knows, Kanda could be in the sex slave trade. I wouldn’t have initially taken the offer either. He’s going to think for you? It’s your assignment Kanda, you can’t just throw it on someone else and expect it to work you retard, lol. Allen threw the book at him, rofl, that was funny. _ I love the synopses of the books Kanda would read, they were amusing and sounded just like his character, rofl. Kanda’s behavior is rubbing off on Allen, that is somewhat amusing. Nice way to state the purpose of your mission Kanda, real classy. U-oh, looks like Allen is dying…do something Kanda, don’t just stand there like an idiot! Aww, he’s in love and doesn’t even know it! _ Pfffft, something. Is. Off. Kanda, make up your mind…do you want the boy forever or not? You’re obviously interested, so let’s just cut to the chase, huh? Kanda wants love, cute. That lemon was great! Allen passed out, pfft…as to be somewhat expected. Kanda can’t chew gum and walk at the same time, rofl. The ending was adorable! Thanks so much for writing this, it was amazing! I thoroughly enjoyed it! _
NoName-chan chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Woo half an hour of procrastination from homework later! :D
I loved this story! It's incredibly well done!
Keep up the great work! :)
AuRi416 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
oh i just find this wonderful story now! poor me...u know i realy love this! each character is IC and the meaning behind the mission just so great!
Shizaki Kuro chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Very good fic!
Thnx for writing!
:3
mjlover0021 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I love it and the lemon at the end was perfect!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Your fic is very cute. I think that it's super amazing.
samwise1327 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
aw,, that was really cute :D
ofnisaofunsdf chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
The end was so happy and pretty and awesome! Yay!
Jize chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
oh my that was well written
Congrats loved it
i think you can be proud of yourself
kuroshiroxyullen chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
wow this was great. i loved it. :D thank you!
xFullmetalSoulx chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Wow. That was amazing.