Omg, I loved this story. I’m so sad for Lucy and Pitch.

I don’t think Melinda is a monster. I think Guardians are too one-sided. I mean she did bad things... but it wasn’t because she wanted to

Lol, I caught the Nico reference. I was wondering though, from the books I member that Mkther Nature remembered her father and it was Pitch that had forgotten her. That was why she was so against him getting. Kathrine as his Nigthmare Princess because she said she was his daughter and no one else can be

Would Jack really attack a kid? And since he punched her, doesn’t take break the treaty as well?

I really liked this story. I’m wondering though, this treaty only stands if someone hurts a believer directly? Or the time Pitch went “gonna kill all the guardians” and changed kid’s dreams to nightmares and made them all miserable counts?

How can Lucy learn to control the send if she’s still human? And can Pitch make people immortal?

Wasn’t Pitch’s daughter’s name Emily?

How does Pitch still have nightmares when they had turned against him?

I playing Closer from Chainsmokers when I was playing this and the song totally fits this story. It evens has a boy and a girl being upset about the fact that they are separated.

OHMYGOSH
You left me speechless, but you really deserve to know how I think about your story so here it goes.
I cried. You let me cry. Fricking Lucy and Jack and Pitch let me cry. It wasn't just the amazing storyline that messed with my feelings, but also your writing. Damn, you have talent! You write phenomenal. The whole story from the prologue to the epilogue was just breathing taking, awesome, exciting and things like that. I'm pretty surprised you don't have more favorites and reviews.
And sorry if my english isn't perfect because I'm not a native.

o my god that was the saddest thing i ever read but it was a really good story it should be a movie sequel to the rise of the guardians

I Really Really Want To Cry Right Now *Actually Im Crying RIght Now
Im Mentally Conected To Your Story

Its So Good To Read From Chapter One To The Last Chapter .. Twists In Your Story Made Me Comfortable.. Dont know Why?
But You Really Make Me Cry Its The First Time I Cried To What I Have Read

Thank You For The Incredible Story Keep Up The Good Work . !

,Pitch

I loved this story so much but ohmygod the last chapter made me freaking sob! Great story!

It's so hard to stop reading after all ths time...after getting to know Lucy and Melinda, Jack and his feelings, ad even though I really thought that Molly was a collassal jerk and was never in a good mood, I hope she rests peacefully. I hope that after a few centuries the guardians can move past this grief and Jack finds a nice girl to settle down with. I hope North will continue his jolly ways, Tooth back to her cheery self, Bunny back to his hopeful ways and Jack back to his fun filled days of mischief. And most importantly, Lucy, rest in Heaven with your family. And as for Pitch, burn in Hell for killing your family and making Lucy something she is not. Melinda and Sweet Serpant, burn in the deepest depths o

I cried at this part.