Wow. You finish a story from 2002 which doesn’t have any reviews since 2009. You sir are amazing. I will give this a full right up in the near future, but I have to commend you for finishing your work! You have my respect and my deepest admiration. With love,

oops actually it was pretty good, just the yuna bit was freaking gay. That's all. I mean, you have talent and you really shine in some parts but you really have trouble in others. Either way I'm enjoying the fic, gj, just less romance would be great.

One of your worst chapters, so much for Shad's talent. Get back to the war plz? You write that so well, but this? Gah...spare me.

i absolutely hate eimour, or whatever, she's the worst character in this. I hope she dies.

i'm sick of these girl fighters and girl leaders and girl annoyances, they belong in the kitchen for God's sake, put them there!

And that's why women should never in positions of power, vulnerable weak indecisive targets. GET BACK TO THE KITCHEN YUNA!

Well ,the whole girl leader stuff is totally stupid. As if a girl could lead anything... I mean, your whole fiasco w/ weston at the beach pretty much proved that. They lack strength in every and any department, "Soft and commanding voice/tone" As if.

Wow...

Hey Adam

It's been a while, huh? I dont know if it was nostalgia or wanting to jump back into FFX without, erm, actually -playing- FFX, but I practically took the entire day and re-read AtS today. I'm still impressed by how well the writing stacks up, all these years later. You've written one hell of a story here, take pride in that fact. And now I'm off to read the first chapter of your sequel! I hope all is good with you these days.

Truly depressing, as is any war. Hopefully there'll be happiness at the end?

haha! I'd be severely traumatised if a body was dumped onto my feast!

Excellent chapter...oh the violent images! XD

I love how Gatta's in charge! I played FFX again recently and this time Gatta died...it was horrible! Glad he's alive in this!

You've definatly got the lying politician thing down with Nyka! I love it!

Oh. My. God. Are they really doing what I think they're doing to Yuna?

I'd have told him to take a hike if he asked me for a kiss!

This was a fantastic chapter! I don't know what I enjoyed more, the high speed action of the blitz match, Weston's moment of glory, the tension building up leading to the moment where Yuna might be executed...or Weston kicking ass!

Really enjoying this fic so far...

No! Don't kill Yuna! She'd kick all their asses...oh wait...no aeons only healing magic...her guardians would kick their asses! XD

It may seem like a boring chappie, but it's necessary. Liked the bit of depth added to Fagan.

Aww! Poor Yuna! I've embarassed myself in a similar way before...

Great chapter, will eventually read the next...I seem to have less and less time in the day to do stuff...