The story of Peter Pan is a lot more tragic than people credit it for. This is such a bittersweet tribute to this tale, and to the two children who could have shared a life together but could not... Beautiful.

It's so late at night, and here i am typing out a review as tears wet my pillow. You did a marvelous job, you made him have feeling he didn't understabd, what he begin to understand and the tragedy of their love.

Makes me cry every time... and I don't mean watery eyes, I mean literal tears running vertically across the bridge of my nose and soaking into my pillow. This work is so moving and emotional, I can't find anything wrong with it at all. It's so amazingly tragic that nothing else compares...

This was so sad.

this was heartbreaking and i loved every second of it

What
What
WHAT
IS
THIS
DAMN
LIFE
/flips tables
/sets curtains on fire
NOOOO DAMMIT THE FEELS SHHHGDHKKHA GKJFFH

You successfully managed to break my heart over and over. Good job! :'(

Morbid, but wonderful.

Awww so sad.

/weeps
take your favorite, you crazy good author, you

Oh my. I. I am am crying. This was so beautiful and so sad at the same time. It breaks my heart. And I even think Peter pan is real and that he will take me to Neverland and this makes it so much worse. I have to stop im getting tears on the keyboard. Amazing.

That was so great. The language was captivating and it made me tear up. If a story can make me cry with only one thousand words, it's doing something very right. Wonderful one shot.

That note is sooooo true

So sad yet so beautiful! I always love these types of stories!

Might as well just break my fingers because I'd cry the same way too.