Wow... this was really, really good. Poor Obi-Wan *winces* Once again, amazing job, and a truly striking story.

~Hilary

Scaryish ending...but very good...

Oh poor Obi-Wan! i feel sorry for Anakin as well, having to watch that. Keep up the good work.

near the beginning of the story, i was planning to saw, "read jedi apprentice?", but in know now that you, like me, probably own most of the series!

i LOVE this story!

it is so great!

you are an awesome author!

i hope that you will write another story, if not a sequal, sometime!

preferrably, this sometime, would be sometime in the near future, obviously!

omg i loved this one! i normally don't like ones with anakin in them, because the writers don't portray him "right", but you did an awesome job with this, portrayed him beautifully. i also loved the way you ended this, with the whole "one day they'll see" thing... once again great fic!

That was a very original idea for a mission. No wonder neither Obi nor the council thought Anakin should go along. From what Anakin was thinking at the end of the mission, I think letting him go along was a bigger mistake than leaving him behind would have been too! You will see and so will the galaxy...A little of the darkside peeking through there. Well done!

Yet another beautiful !

this was one wicked story! sad but wicked

wow..awesome story! that was great and the ending was perfect. you're good at torturing obi-wan..lol. great job! :)

Hello Arldetta,

I have consdered what I was going to write in this review for a while, now, but I have decided to just say what I think.

I read this fic months ago on FanfiX, and I was struck buy it's awsome, introspective style and depth of emotion. It is obvious that in this story love is respected, ignorance is scathing, violence is real and pain actually hurts. I wanted to review it for you by sending you an e-mail, but, knowing that most writers like their privacy and prefer to keep reviews on sights like this and not in their inbox, I was delighted to find it here, amongst the dusty halls of .

You have an awe-inspiring talent, which I am phenominally jealous of. You actually understand your characters, Obi is self-sacrificing and Anakin is subject to so many of the hurts and memories of his past life.

The plot for this story is very original. The brutal lawyers are horrific. And, after all, it's always the past that guides the future.

Please carry on writing, you truely are one of the best authors around.

Love,

Padawan AngelinaDaisey

XXX

Veeeeery nice story. I like how you ended it, 'cause it kinda gives Anakin another reason of why he turned to the Dark side... :D Like I said before, *VERY* nice story. Me liked. _

hey it's me Andre!

Remember me from your little collaboration idea?

I rememeber reading this story from

It's a really great story!

Poor Obi-Wan...