I'm kinda bummed I like this story so much. Based on what you've written, you don't update much and it's sad to find a good story that was abandoned. I hope you continue to update regularly.

oh my asdjkl! you have to update asap! i need to know what happens! i love the story line and i cant think of any other author to write it! please continue!1

I like this sweet side of Draco you should write more of him taking care of Hermione, it's sweet and a good foundation for their possible relationship, if that's where you want this story to go.

At least Draco is decent. He understands restrictions and limits. It's so weird to me: he's a death eater— he sees, or has seen death. But he throws up when he sees her, living in ruins. I like how he makes her special: he could easily put her in some of Astoria's robes and tell Astoria to get over it, but he puts her in his mum's clothes. His dead mum, who did everything she could to protect him. The woman that he really loved. I don't know I just feel like he wouldn't have let Astoria wear any of his mum's clothes. Or, I'm instigating something that isn't there because I know that this is a Dramione.

Ah, how long has it been since I read an update for this fic? I hardly even get on this site anymore to be honest, but I couldn't resist giving you my thoughts. My first suggestion is you put a summary of what happened last time at the beginning of the chapter, since updates are erratic and I read so much I can't remember everything.

Unfortunately, my liking of Jacob did not increase over time. I don't know if you wrote him that way for a reason, but I'm glad he's out of the picture. Thanks to him everything is royally screwed up, so I don't even feel an ounce of sympathy for him.

Poor Hermione, though! I don't exactly remember what happened with her last time, but she's certainly been dealt the short end of the stick this time. Hopefully things will turn up for her soon!

:( Jacob! He tried so hard but, alas, his best wasn't good enough. And Hermione! Now she's stuck, too! I'm starting to ship the two of them more than I ship Dramione right now and that's dangerous.

Well, it's me again. I'm surprised you're not tired of me yet, since I've been around for so long :P But I will agree with you on this- this chapter was awkward. I can't recall all of Draco and Hermione's interactions, but this seems a little unrealistic to me. One day Hermione's being tortured and can barely think coherently, the next she and Draco are making eyes at eachother and are tempted to get it on in a prison cell? I'm not trying to knock you for this, or turn down any possible D/H interaction, but it seems like the herione's "plan" for excape is always, ALWAYS to seduce her captor. Under the circumstances, I guess she can't do much else, but still. You could have done better without all the description of their tension, too. It's always better to show when writing, not tell. Don't just tell me what Hermione looks like and what she's doing, show me how she feels about the whole situation, as she walks closer to Draco, heart pounding in her chest and her breath hitching just from thinking about touching him...etc etc. You're normally pretty good with this, but I found the end dragged in this chapter.

Sorry for the long review, but I just get so carried away with this sometimes. You can disregard this whole thing if you want to.

lol it was pretty good. eye descriptions are a surefire way of setting the mood. who knew Hermione Granger could have sex appeal? who knew Draco Malfoy could fall victim to said sex appeal? oh how the mighty have fallen.

Hmm, I don't quite remember what happened last time we met, but this a was decent chapter, all things considered. It looks like Draco's walls have finally broken down and he's starting to have doubts about which side of the war he's on. Maybe this 'great Dramione action' is going to come into play soon?

That, that whole chapter, was Dramione. The pure hatred in their eyes that later melts into something else; Hermione's naiveté and Draco's steely, sadistic charm; the tension you can slash with a sword (dramatic words for a dramatic couple). I love it. This is what i've been waiting for: the crude, twelve-year-old Draco. The Draco that is too stuck in his old ways to try and become something he's not. The Draco that embraces the fact that he's a vile, evil little cockroach. I'm ranting. I can actually see the dramione. Shame on Harry for thinkimg that someone from the light could actually play a convincing death eater (*cough cough* Hermione in DH). But on a closing note, if that was bad, I'm excited to see what's good.

Ugh, I never though we could trust Jacob to pull through. Looks like I was right after all. If you ask me, his life wasn't worth the trade :L Sorry for the late read, but I had my birthday and then my sister's and school orientation and other crap. Too bad I can't give you some thin mints as an additional present. Good luck with school and writing! I've always found it tricky to balance to the two.

Update update update! Please? Lol

I really thought Jacob was going to be capable. But this is a Dramione; not a Hermione OC. Of course the noble Order can't negotiate to save two lives. It's a shame Molly wasn't able to kill Bellatrix. I know it's not a filler, but the end made it seem that way.

Nice to see you're uploading again :D I totally get what you mean about the weather, I live in the northeast area of the states and the weather is HORRID. I never want to write when it's hot outside _

As for the dreams thing, I've always found dreams quite interesting. For Jacob's school nurse to be able to create good dreams and send them to him is amazing. Too bad it doesn't work for us non-magical people. I'm sure she has a different view of "happy" dreams that Jacob though, right?

A word of caution: if you're going to try lucid dreaming, be EXTREMELY CAREFUL where you get the information from. I can't do it either, but then again, I don't want to. Some people tell you the wrong way to lucid dream, and it can result in sleep paralysis, which if you haven't heard of it, it's when your whole body freezes up and it's COMPLETELY terrifying. I had it happen to me once and I never want to repeat the experience again! Ugh.

(Now that I feel like I've given you a lecture, haha) I look forward to the next chapter :D I hope you have fun writing it :D Try not to die in this heat!

poor Jacob :( how is he going to save the girl he fancies? Bellatrix, ever the sadist. I wonder how real Draco is taking captivity...?