Oh snap Rush, Torgal, and a kitten.
So much fighting.
But the kitten!
SHE'S TOO CUTE I MIGHT DIEEE!
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hm. Okay... so it's kinda something new. Rush is like a momma bear, and Torgal, is well, I'm getting the "We're sovani, you're only a mitra-har-har-how-dare-you-think-you-can-raise-one-of-us. Well what I'm saying is, Torgal's somewhat showing a higher-than-thou attitude, which is good-I think, well, no. I believe it's good, especially with that somewhat back story you shared a few months back.

Anyway, it's only the first chapter so there's nothing much happening. I must ask though, is this in the same universe as UE? If it is then we'll there be a young sovani kit running around? (She'd be a great supporting character if ever, and since you've already made a back story, you must put her in UE too.)

You have a lot of '?!' going around, especially with Torgal. I dunno, just don't peg the guy to easily loose his cool. Then again this is (I want my italics dermmet) a special case. I haven't seen any female sovanis in game, and I doubt there would be a dearth of sovanis prowling on the surface if they have a considerable amount of females.

Your kit just became an AAA grade merchandise, hmm?

-mimic

PS: ...the kit's not a remnant, or some kind of new deity, or whatever? ...is she?

PPS: Told you I'd be brainfried.