It's been more than two weeks! :( Please update, I love your story!

Make more PLZ! and may being not proper in eating doesn't sound like the may I usually read. I know she eats a lot, but it was never mentioned that she has no manners! I mean she went to a ball, sometime in pokemon series, so I think she would have her manners.

chap 4...may taught the guys some lesson...leaf called her may instead of lillian...is it leaf blurting out or...typing...?

First couple to kiss-Paul and Dawn!

Lol loved the chapter, poor guys that are going to feel the wrath of Dawn. ;3

Chapters seems very jumbled abit hard to follow especially with the sparse detailing. Also the story doesn't seem to be leading anywhere

LOL. I love dawns personality! She devious and partly annoying at the same time. XD

I can't wait until the next chapter! I loved this chapter!

YAY! EXCITEMENT!

Ooh! Cute!