I love how jack was teasing jamie in the end xD lightens the mood up abit.

Awwwww I loved this and it was so creative

What a bittersweet fanfic.

It really touched on all the emotions that people were feeling at the time.

It kept the Guardians and Jamie in character.

So heartwarming...

Yes it is sad about the shooting but they will always be in our hearts. Beautifully written

...Ok, this made me tear up.

I loved the way you described how they're not really gone. How, just because you can't see them doesn't mean they're not there, and how they'll always keep existing, even if they're invisible.

This was really quite uplifting. Well done. You did a good job.

Bundi

Wonderfully touching story. It seems to like Jack to instantly run to Jamie to ensure his safety once there was nothing more he could do.

Sad but beautiful. Add me to the long list of crying readers. :)

Love this. Thanks so much for writing this. I will always remember those kids. Thanks for writing this. God bless!

That is so such a sweet idea and it is so true. They will never be forgotten so long as we remember.

That's incredibly sad, but incredibly sweet as well. Poor Jack. I can understand freaking out over something like that if you felt responsible but just couldn't do what you feel you should be able to do. It feels pretty awful when something like that happens. Poor guy.

This was well written. Thanks for posting this. I appreciate being able to read this.

Beautifully written :)

This is really beautiful :')

Awwwwww! So Sweet!

Because sometimes, the big brothers need comfort from the little brothers. ;)

Jamie is wise beyond his years in this, and I love how he is. You write him and Jack really well, and their teasing at the end was cute.

Beautiful tribute. Very well done. :)