i give it four stars for originally And a creative plot twist whatever became of Prince Claude and princess alois also say to hold sebby hostage he brings out the best and worst fangirl/boy in us all even grell Grell:she's right bassy now give me a kiss ! Lol
other can girls screaming sebby run!. me: get him grell .Sebastian: noooo i just want my bochan ,young master save me! Ciel: sounds like a personal problem doesn't it cousin yep want some popcorn this show is better than watching those servants of yours destroy the manor ..yeah I'll have some

WAIT ALOIS LIKES WHEN I SMILE OH MY GOD!

great story can i have my hug now ciel?

Nutella is life!

wonderful structure and perfect spelling and grammar. Well written story. 8/10

Actually, not too long ago, my mom and I watched a movie version of The Girl In The Box. It's a little funny you bring that up.

I RECOGNIZED THAT DOCTOR WHO REFERENCE! Also, you are one hell of a troll. Why do you do this to me!?

Very good, cute. However, it seemed to hint that the book would tell how to make Ciel have children, and I kind of wanted to find out how you would portray that, if you ever decide to do an after story, that should be a part of it

Nutella on the flipping cake fudging fudge cake XD

"Suus mendax odi Cur mentiretur? Quid ego animadverto sero? Non sum dignus verum Cur omnis linea neverat, Certamen omne parta, Veni de ens supernationali sleuth! Nunc scio vere noceat, Cum es, iens ut intellegeretis? Ut, quod Dolet mihi magis es mendaciis. Est veritas omnia mea semper exspecta, Tu dicis falsum, mendacium non album, Despectum iacet in suam radicem Odi mendaces ad triticum, Exspecta non dixi quod prius? Etiam feci quas simul concurrerunt. Mea quam cito tu oblitus es, Et quam cito doleo Eligens credere in vobis; Fide vos vera essent, Quod fuistis amo mihi, Et non potui amo te."

Latin

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"It's a false hate why lie? What I've noticed too late? I am not worthy, but why all the line had his, every battle is won, I came from being a super sleuth! We now know that really hurt, when are you going to understand that? For example, that hurts me more in a lie. As the truth of all that I have I always wait, you say something false, a lie is not white, I was despised in his own lies I hate liars to the root of the wheat, Wait I did not say that before? Yes, I did that once ran . My love, how quickly you have forgotten, and as soon as I am sorry When choosing to believe in you; By faith you were true, that you were like me, but they could not love you."

That is what I got when I translated it with a Latin dictionary the checked twice by a Latin teacher that I have and am currently learning from. - Kuro

Awww! He proposed! How cute. I hope you make the prequel of how Pure and Dark met, cause that would be cool. I can't wait to read the sequel! I bet it's gonna be good.

BURN ANGELA BUUUUUURRRRRRRRN! I'm glad Ciel is better now that he doesn't have to worry about that bitch anymore.

Ciel, you're high as balls! And he's calling Bassy loooove! *giggles like an idiot and twilrs hair around finger* I will take your advice and not mess around with Jimson Weed.

Mwahaha your evil plan is working! Hopefully Ciel will start falling for Sebastian, and maybe the same will happen with Claude and Alois!

"Lay off him. He's mine." That sentence is pretty much every fangirl when talking about Sebastian. So Bassy's gonna get Ciel kinda drunk? I'm interested to see how that plays out!