This was amazing, I hope you can write about them again, your writing is pure perfection, you get those missing moments so right and true to character...

Great to read a new update!
I love the detail in the way you write, you are gifted! Please keep writing, and thanks for sharing!

I got chills with the last four words, very powerful for someone who needs reassuring! AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME job on this one! I can't wait to read more :)

The emotions in this were written very nicely! I enjoy how Emma will always go back to fix things between them, knowing Jenny is everything to her. I look forward to more :)

This was a really nice little story. I can see Jenny not wanting to celebrate and Emma trying to make it better. I like how Emma is willing to 'give in' and go back, to fix things, knowing Jenny is all that matters to her. Hope you write some more! )

Another great part! Really loved all the turmoil and angst in this. You wrote the emotions so beautifully. More please ? ;)

Another little and precious chapter for this story! Thank you! It is very romantic the way you describe the night and the feeling of Emma that mirror the nature around her !
I am so Happy that she went back . It warms My heart. Thanks for sharing!

Wow! Good that Emma did walk away from Jenny, to gather her thoughts at least and to calm herself down! Can't wait to read more :)

This was another splendid piece. I am still very curious to know what happened between them. I also think I should point out that you do a perfect job of describing the Emma we saw at the end of the show. She had come out of her shell amd became this blooming young adult who was there for Jenny. The maturity of her knowing she should realize Jenny is grieving and understand that she isn't the same anymore is just what the Emma on the show would do. So bravo! Great job! I can't wait to see the next part :)

Very much interested in this, can't wait to see more :)

WOW, what a great start! Can't wait to read what happened with Jenny and Emma to make Emma run out and now Jenny is laying in bed crying!

You have me intrigued. Why is Emma crying? What did Jenny do? You must write more please :) I really like what you have so far!

Ehm... I am Kykky and I am the anonymous that poted some instants ago... :)

Uh... So short and so terribly painful at the same time ! But: what happened?! No you can't stop here . Not now! You must go on and tell to us another great story! ;)
I love the way you write !
:)