Reviews for Waiting
Guests are cool chapter 7 . 4/25/2014
Well, what a way to shit on my day. Your going on hiatus, possibly for good... Ah well, we'll miss you anyways, and thanks for writing the amazing stories that you did write. If ever you feel like coming back, we'll be here ;)
PenAndPoint chapter 7 . 4/26/2014
God, I love this fic. It's got me jumping between hysterical laughter at their antics, to sobbing emotionally at all the sappy parts. Fics like this is what makes my heart beat happily. I love me a good romance story. And especially one that is as well written as this. I loved the way this story was written almost like poetic prose at times. Kudos on the details!
wechgabi chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Just a little review to say that I really enjoyed to read your story, I'm a fan of this pairing but it's hard to find long story with this one.
Good continuation
JPElles chapter 7 . 5/7/2013
Great wrap up. Can't wait to see what you do next. Really nice story with Cloud and Yuffie. Great seeing more of Wutai here as well. Being much like the British royalty is definitely in Yuffie and her father's future. The more you run from something the more you're forced into it after all. Poor Yuffie.
JPElles chapter 6 . 4/25/2013
Tifa and the other kids she was friends with did bully Cloud some when they were younger remember. So the friendship wasn't always great. Great present though. A reminder of who Cloud was and where he came from. A part of his past that doesn't involve pain.
HazzaTL3 chapter 5 . 4/23/2013
damn I I don't like long chapters. finally finished this one after 4 attempts..

not bad chapter. its not the type of pairing I usually go for as i don't like cloud/yuffie. I prefer yuffie/rufus. cloud/tifa.
JPElles chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
Fun chapter. That is something Cid would do. lol.
JPElles chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
Interesting chapter. I'm sure for saving the people Cloud or at least Yuffie will be able to walk away from this with a very large payday. Saving the whole place. Keep it up.
warrior of six blades chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
Great job on this chapter and on the scenes where Cid kept trying to avoid letting Marlene hear any curse words. Only for her to hear a long rant of them in the end and make Barret a very angry parent. I also like the small Cloud and Yuffie moments in this chapter as well. Keep up the good work!
HazzaTL3 chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
Wow that was a long chapter.. but well structured and well written.

what chaos will ensue in the next chapter?
jem1923 chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
That poor sacred tree! What did it ever do to deserve such a cruel fate? I don't see how Cloud can make a move on Yuffie while on a road trip with the group. Who is watching Marlene? Great story. Please update son : )
warrior of six blades chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Nice job on this chapter and I have to admit the part where cid crashed the car into the sacred lifegiver tree was funny. None to mention something I could imagine happening to Cid at least 3 times a month with his drinking. Also I like the small cloffie moment you made in this chapter. Shame the police the killed the mood though, Damn coppers. Anyways keep up the good work and good luck on your future chapters/stories.
sdphantom10 chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
Eh whateva I've never seen Airplane! The line felt right with Yuffie saying it anyway. I love this chapter so much and Cid crashing the car on the Sacred tree was GOLD!
JPElles chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
With time to calm him down and throwing Cid under the boss for the blame. Combined with feigning ignorance to what happened. I'm sure Yuffie can get out of it. Of course Cid will want to not come back to Wutai again. ever. lol.
HazzaTL3 chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
arrested lol don't get why avalanche would have been too.

pretty funny though.
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