Reviews for This Isn't a Fairy Tale
hausofyas chapter 6 . 6/22/2016
Hey! Can you please continue writing Jack & Georgie one shots? I want to see more of a jealous and insecure Jack Bass about the friendship of Dan and Georgina or about Milo's fatherhood, you could do it one with Dan as a strong paternal figure in the kid's life and Jack feels a little less.
breaker99 chapter 6 . 7/29/2014
Awww whats going to happen to Milo! Now you have me gripping my seat worried that Milo might not make it and now im really looking forward to the next chapter of this story! I love these one-shots and its really interesting to see a maternal side of Georgina.
bellarose-riddle chapter 5 . 11/2/2013
Love this!
Hope you can update soon :)
TruC7 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Dans a Brooklyn nobody but he still bothers Jack- of course he does. I like this. It's all sort of insightful. Georgina and Dan Are friends and he admits this! I like that too. They're all friends now. They have to be. Even if they don't always admit it.
Georgina is chill inducing exciting sometimes. I do love that about her. She and Jack make sense somehow and that in itself is amusing.
TruC7 chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
How cute! Georgina and Jack have Lena! And he tucks her in!
I like how we get tidbits and slow revelations how Jack Bass has a real heart and how he does care and how it makes sense and the adorableness of it is giddying. Georgina is Georgina, snarky, snarling but fun all the same. Any mention of Henry Bass is always warming.
TruC7 chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
And this one was adorable x)
It really made me smile inside. Milo thinks Jack Bass is out to kill him and instantly I think of course Jack the selfish serial killer IS out to kill Georgina's kid- inadvertently of course. I love how you added how Chuck killed Bart (inadvertently of course xp) and how milo finds out and pounders over how Jack is probably intending to do the same to him. It's funny and in sync with how a kid would think in such a complex little situation. And the Anya bit is quite perfect.
Here is Milo connecting with his Russian roots and of course he's drawn to Ana and of course she's the prettiest thing ever being Vanya and Dorota's x) I love how all theses GG kids find each other and the part where is Constance and Jude's the only school in Manhattan? was really rather funny. I really liked Milo and Ana's interaction, Jack interrupting and Milo deciding he had to confront Jack once and for all.
The ending was sweet too. Cute little power couple.
TruC7 chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
I like how all these chapters talk of milo being pent up in his room but each gives a different insight. Georgina sees it as the kid finally cracking, jack sees it as milo barely breathing, bathing. And of course, if you really have to study Georgina it's true that Dan's one of the only few people she's ever really...loved. Sort of. She was kind of obsessed with him. They are sort of friends. It's nice. The way he tries. The fact he's still there for milo. Of course Georgina is not a neglectful mother.
It weaves together seamlessly.
I like her affronted demeanour and her struggle to cope. It's seamless enough that it makes sense.
TruC7 chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
Well well well.
I always did wonder about poor little milo. At one point we have an adorable baby with doe eyes becoming the love of dans life, with his name on the birth certificate, adoption agencies ready and the next- Georgina comes, takes and leaves and dan doesn't even care anymore does he?
Except not in your fic.
This is a brave attempt to write Jack and Georgina and you even make it sound interesting and in character. Georgina says, my kids not for sale, do Chuck and Blair want to get in line too? And all this really does sound like her and it makes me laugh. Jack tells her he loves her and she laughs. Chuck is nice to milo. Milo is nice to jack and jack loves milo. Milo is sad.
It makes sense of course that he is sad and the situation is complicated to say in the least, in fact, it's actually mind boggling but these upper east side kids have been through worse and have come out dark eyed and furious and smirking and fighting. Milo is Georgina's kid so while I expect the gentle calmness and perseverance I'm also waiting for the snark, the resilience and the wicked humour. The strength that overshadows the sadness. That eccentric streak that would make him see the funny side of all this madness.
I do find this story- these one shots engaging though x) I really like how you've tried to weave in this odd little family together. It's touching and believable and fun. Do continue, looking toward to more!
Sel Kyle chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
Loving it so far! Can't wait for third part!
Queen of Persia chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
This is quite possibly the most adorable one shot that I have ever read! Milo and Ana are my new ship! They're perfect! Absolutely wonderful! I love how Jack is (despite everything) a sort of fatherly figure for Milo. I definitely think he would be the one to soften up Jack. I'm assuming Jack was involved in inviting Ana over? I knew I loved Jack for a reason! I die a little inside when a he's portrayed as the evil antagonist in fics :( Jack is a good man at heart! Just like my little Chuckles!

A little thing about Ana's last name, though. If Vanya's surname is Kishlovsky, then Ana's would be Kishlovskaya, as Russian surname's are gender specific.

I adore this. So much that I reviewed! :hangs head in shame: I'm not much of a reviewer, so feel special! ;)

xoxo

PS; In case you feel like replying, my username on is Queen of Persia. I'm just too lazy to login :p
Guest chapter 4 . 6/26/2013
Awesome. I live JG and your hint on them
Befham chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
I adore this, I really hope that you continue at some point.
Liluxstellar chapter 4 . 6/2/2013
Can you please continue that last chapter? It was lovely and i've been looking for a jackgina story for a while and this one's perfect beca use it also includes milo and hid relationship with Jack :)
bellarose-riddle chapter 4 . 4/9/2013
I love this!
Georgina and Jack are just perfect for each other! And Dan and Georgina are lovely :)
Guest chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
You write Georgina very well, she is a complex character and you really captured her can not wait for Jack's pov
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