| Reviews for Ancile Angelus |
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   Z.N. Singer chapter 1 . 9/15/2008 Very nice, though it seems to improve towards the end as far as rhythm goes. All of the sudden its a rhyming theme...not sure how that happened, but the poems best written part definitely starts from 'have you ever dreams of flying?'. Not sure whats with the sudden difference...anyway, I'm very sorry to hear the actual author doesn't like things posted. maybe you could tell her for me anyway:I'm an author at and we are putting up a new fanfiction section sometime within the next month. Since it will work by submission, something I am very excited about, we need help for our entries, possibly for the whole first year we will. Please tell her that I'm very picky about poetry but hers impressed me, and I hope she might consider allowing us to host some of her fan-poetry. My email is available from my profile;please attach submission to email as a word document. |
| Son Of Evil chapter 1 . 8/2/2007 Fantastic |
| Belial Ravencroft chapter 1 . 3/16/2004 Oh how sad! I hate it when Lucifer is sad! It kills me everytime. Love the poem though. |
| decoupage chapter 1 . 1/28/2004 aww...I like it a lot! Lucifer is so sexy. |
| Astarii Amaranth chapter 1 . 12/21/2003 Beautiful. I hate short reviews as I think if you are compelled enough to review you should be compelled enough to write a review of some substance...however I am beyond words at the moment as far as this poem is concerned. Ethereally beautiful. Purely, simply, truthfully. -Astarii |
| kanemi chapter 1 . 11/27/2003 Nice. Very nice. |
| Carla chapter 1 . 11/18/2002 WOW! That was REALLY good! |
| Ellerfru chapter 1 . 10/14/2002 wow. this is great. |
| Typo Demon chapter 1 . 10/7/2002 Beautiful and haunting.. Lucifer could and should have, really written this. One of the best poems I have ever read. ~Typo |
| Darkish chapter 1 . 9/29/2002 It's really quite good, you and your partner should get a great pat on the back. The tone of the poem suits Lucifer, and I particularly like the 5th paragraph. Personally, IMHO, if you weren't so intent on rhyming you could do better |
| Hotohori Fan chapter 1 . 9/23/2002 Oh my... this is absolute lovely... and sad too... Lucifer is talking about how he wished Alexiel to be with him... even though he's the Lord of the Underworld... *first time here anyway... haha!* |
| benito the little devil chapter 1 . 9/19/2002 aww i love lucifer. hes such a doll! lol. kira... lucifer... *sigh* |
| Dreamer chapter 1 . 9/8/2002 oh god i'm never gonna be a sucessful writer if this is the competition! |
| Libellen chapter 1 . 9/6/2002 WOW! I LOVE IT! _! |
| Avari de Lioncourt chapter 1 . 8/28/2002 Oh my, that was very nicely done. As you said the timeline was a little skewed, but that is hardly a problem. I enjoyed this, but then I am partial to Lucifer and Alexial. Well done,tell your friend not to worry this is a splendid peice. Avari de Lioncourt |
