It was awesome!

Mmmm... more... made me so hotttt... and wettt... mmmmm.

More Miraj!

Ventress watched the two naked padawans hang helplessly in cuffs.
The two Jedi were blindfolded. Barris and Ahsoka could sense Ventress in the room.
Ventress touched Barrisses stomach and could feel her piss filled bladder. You 'Ve being hanging here for how long now? I don't remember sending in toliet droids. Ventress punched Barriss in the stomach as Barris needed to pee rather badly. Soon Barris could'nt hold in her pee any longer as she finally pissed herself.
Then Barris shamefully swang around trying to escape the sith Knights tounge.
Ventress the started to punch Ahsoka in the stomach. Ahsoka needed to pee aswell.
Ahsoka knew what she wanted to do as she spread her knees and relieved herself. Ventress licked Ansoka's pee happily but she wanted more.
Ventress mixed in chemicals with water until she found the perfect potion of cut off the cuffs on Ansoka and Barrisses she dumped one of her potions into Ahsoka's mouth and dumped one of her other potions into Barrisses mouth. The potion would make them need to pee rather badly and would start in a short time.
Soon Ahsoka and Barris needed to pee rather Ventress kicked Barrisses stomach as hard as a sith knight could. Barris tried to run to a bathroom she saw but when she'd got into a toliet Barriss knew it was too late. She spread apart her legs shamefully as hot piss rolled down her legs and pooled on her feet.
Ventress was watching Barris piss herself and chuckleling loudly at the green faced mirialan ( who was red faced because Ventress had dragged in Ansoka to see her pee.)
Barris slowly walked out of the bathroom. Ahsoka needed to pee aswell. Soon she closed her eyes,stood up,and opened her legs. She pissed herself and then fell on to her knees and started to cry like a two year old.
Then Ventress had a sneaky put a sheet of leafs on Barriss so she could'nt see Barrisses doodie but could see her Ventress put a bra on Barris. Lastly Ventress dumped some more of her potions into Barrisses mouth.
Ventress did the same with Ahsoka but instead ventress put a tiny pantie that could'nt even cover Ahsoka's whole bottom on Ahsoka.
Ventress told the two padawans to dance for her and pee crazyly at the same two padawans started dancing and peeing with their legs open.
After that Ventress dumped the rest of her potions into Ahsoka and Barrisses mouths. When their masters came to rescue them they saw their padawans the padawans opened their knees and started peeing in front of their masters.

Eh. I don't really like sex slaves but I like ahsoka and Barriss together
:P

looks good however it needs fine polishing and the randomness of switching to assaj ventress is annoying you should continue with Ahsoka and the queen regardless of canon, yuor ending being a delightful cliffhanger especially with the idea of ahsoka actually WANTING to be with the slaver queen.

it sucked

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Make more Between sen. Cici. (Choo chi) and Ahsoka

Cool

Great

good story but could you by any chance add quotations when the queen and ahsoka are talking. It's a little difficult tell who's talking and what is dialogue and what is you, the author, describing the scene.