**slow round of applause*** Thank you. Just thank you. Because of you, I now have a headcanon of shizuo loosing his strength and you hath inspired me. This story? Fucking great, I re-read it every month, this time in 2 days. I appreciate your existence and dedication. Thank you ;_;

Okay so I got through to the end. Grammar slightly improved towards the end. Honestly, this was a very sweet story. The last sex scene was very beautiful and emotionally satisfying. I thought you did really well in Izaya showing Shizuo how he couldn't be a monster because he could feel pleasure...along with the other things he did to protect Izaya. All characters were very much in character. And I liked how you showed us both perspectives throughout the story. Overall, this story was thought out really well, however, my only complaint was the grammar mistakes, such as punctuation and sentence structure. Maybe I'm a bit grammar obsessed. Sorry for the previous comment. It may have been too harsh. Thank you for writing this story. I appreciate the time and effort put into this work and look forward to reading more of your stories.

I like the overall idea with this story, however, your frequent misuse of grammar is really annoying. I'm having to rearrange most of your sentences due to them being incomprehensible. Also, little detail is provided as to the transition of movements, which the reader also has to fill in the blanks. It's a lil dis our aging to continue reading. I really hope you can one day go back and fix all grammatical errors in this story just so the readers are better able to understand and follow what's going on. Still indecisive whether I'll finish reading this. If I do, I'll be sure to leave another review of my thoughts.

The moving back and forth confused me half the time, but I appreciate that you gave us two sides of the story. Although I found some erroneous uses of the comma, the overall writing was alright.

Write on.!
~Yuna

I loved it. Thank you for this story :)

AWESOME WONDERFUL I PUT A WHOLE DAY INTO IT AND I LOVED IT AWESOME JUST AWESOME!

ok i don't normally comment 'til i finish a completed fic but i loved how 'izaya' was in your list of warnings hahah XD

That was beautiful. I loved it.

Awesome story! Loved it! Favorited! It seems everything you write is wonderful!

Crying because it's over. Haha just kidding, but this was a great story! I really liked the last paragraph. And I'm happy to see all is well! So you did a wonderful job, let me applaud you! :))

Awwww...cute. And different. I've never read anything like it.

Eh? It's finished? ALREADY? Man, I'm just realized it when I read your A/N...
Thank you for always! Your story is great!

Aww... :)

*sniff sniff*

It's over ;_;

Finally they came to terms with their feelings and their relationship with others (were forgiven by Shinra and Celty, at least XD).

Why do i have this foreboding feeling that this story is nearing its end, or is it just me?