wow. that was one powerful story. I really felt like I connected with Shira and it makes me feel like this is more than a story, but a flashback. the ending was very distressing though...

This was such a fantastic story. Love the radically different plot, it’s refreshing to read about stories that differ greatly from the movie. I was a bit confused at times but that just made the story more suspenseful. But the ending was really depressing, it was really sad Diego died in the end.

I didn’t really like how you used “ya” in the dialogue and although I wouldn’t have minded that much a few times, you used it way too much but oh well thats minor I guess.

I remember reading Ice age stories here 2 or 3 years ago, and your stories were one of the best in the fandom, I really enjoyed them. You are a brilliant write and since I’m back, I will be reading your stories again and I will leave a review this time.

Jtgil

The ending is so sad. Why did Diego have to die along with Starfire.

Amazing Story PureSaberHeart,

This story story was as twisted, dark and confusing as amazing. I love your kind of those storys and the dark and twisted style you use to write your story's. I've read this story the third time now and i can't help but wait eagerly for the sequel "StarFire 2" or however it'll be called.
I hope you will upload the first part for the sequel of this absolute amazing story, so that my thirst will finally be full-filled.

Keep on doing this kind of amazing Story'. My Review for "Shira's Cryin'" will be up tomorrow i think, jsut be patient.

One last sentence: May your time on last forever and always.

Greetings.
Acliptika

Make an alternate ending or a sequel but dont let end the story like this, it's so sad D,:

WTF come on! -_- you should of made it a happy ending -_- please at least fix it up with another final chapter i felt like killing myself when i read the ending -_- i actually feel like dropping dead :( i hate stories that end like that :( i beg you please read this soon and change the ending -really hopeful reader Alex

Man the action details are great very descriptive. But DAMN! Why did you kill StarFire off -_- i was really hoping him to help more later on i guess so far its been incredible. Keep it up with more stories.

keep up the good work!

Wait wtf that ... Can't ... Oh come on that's not fair D: if there is no sequel I'm gonna flip

OMFG this story is goddammit AMAZING I ABSOLUTLEY LUURVE THIS! You should post it to a publisher and make him/her print this story into a book!

Beautifully done. Amazing. You are a GREAT writer. The end was so sad, but not all endings are happy. :') Great job!

LOVE THIS ONE! XD :D

GREAT CHAPTER I LUVE IT SO MUCH! :D

dude great story and your not the only one that wakes up at 12 o clock in the afternoon i do as well! XD :)

Very good chapter 5 dude! loved it :) 3