Good job so far. Please update! :(

Two things: its spelled yahg, and more pregnancies i find it attractive

so um yeah starting to totally hate this if more chapters are like this one its like 90% crazy gibberish. There is absolutly no way she'd ever be able to infiltrate anything... one a single doctor check up would turn up all the dna changes, 5 minutes of conversation would reveal she is completly 100% mentally unstable. She'd/he'd? never be allowed within any military the universe, maybe you should check yourself into a mental institution or your main character should atleast. But since you know I hope the crazy won't last since really this story won't work with 90% of every chapter is pointless arguing with herself, I'll keep reading whats written and HOPE that maybe sanity might make a brief appearance if I'm at all lucky

ahhh stop breaking the forth wall, although I do enjoy this story the insanity and long rambling about meaningless crap is really starting to bother me. Nice writing even I don't like or enjoy some aspects

this is most likely dead but whatever I'll still review I'm enjoying but the whole Insanity things and jumping around random tangents are driving me nuts its feels like 20-40% of the text could of been deleted and the reader wouldn't of missed anything

hi so after reading what you have right now i will say you are a good writer

I'm intrigued, and enjoyed reading so far.

this chapter was quite good. i like how you are fleshing out your SI also how many chapter do you think time wise it will be until see put on the sparton armor and will see have hardlight wepaon's?also thank's this story's
been great so far.

This fic has so many mental bullshit moments. Normally, it's not that bad if it's done once in a while, but you are doing it almost constantly at the cost of advancing the story. I don't enjoy stories with almost complete introspection when very little happens in the outside world. Try to pick up the pace in order to induce the sense of progress.

WOW! mind blown that was a lot to take in, it seems she is finally starting to crack completely and that makes it a lot more interesting to read, seeing if she will succumb to her own insanity or if someone might be able to pull her out of it (Even herself).

I don't find her overpowered with the constant mental collapse occurring but that's just me, brilliant chapter though and I really liked the action scenes, if this is your first attempt then i'm looking forward to your next ones :D -Kieran

Ack, she almost got away from Cerberus shame though, if she did get away they wouldn't let her go peacefully and i'm quickly starting to hate them more than I and every other sane person already did, good chapter, favourite :D

I really like all the interesting idea's in this fic, it is quickly becoming one of my favourites :D and that's saying something!

Damn that old man is creepy...and I find the idea about genetics really interesting, followed. :)

Yep she is really falling apart into fragments.