The way the story is going I think they should all be friends and stuff ️ it’d work

Also I really like the story so far

Plz update

Thxs

I’m so sorry but I started laughing after it said she passed. Like of course that’d happen to Harry! And I feel so terrible cause it’s sad not funny

more please

Harry loved her? He sure moved on quick.

I think the Potter twins should be introduced before the talk about the contract maybe even making astoria a godmother. You could also have Lady Greengrass help take care of the babies while Harry is at school or elsewhere or when he's busy.

I enjoy your story. I hope you come back and finish it.
Thank you.

Bellatrix should not be forgiven, seeing as she willingly killed Sirius. ANYWHO... Update please and don't give up on your story, its really good.

I think they should you could have them be spys for the light

more please

Draco should repent

please continue this story

plz plz plz update i really like this story :)

Sorry but your story just didn't keep my interest, the reason for that is that in my opinion the pace is too rushed, too much things happen and the chapters are small, so it gives to me a rushed feeling that I didn't like.

Hope that my opinion help you in becoming a better writer.

Interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more.

I have yet to find a 'teenage parent harry' story that i don't enjoy, but this is the first time that it's been an OC who died in the first chapter. Way to kill'em off.