Oh the fandom really needs more FFn about this couple~ Some short events are really sweet, and the others are funny or sad. But, those events are what make them an interesting couple, that's what I thought after reading this story XD Thank you for writing this!

Keep writing!

KensyEcho

I really like this story! It seems so in-character and well-written.

Heartwarming, cute, bittersweet ... I love it. :D
Dammit, now I wanna read moar stories about Chikage and Toichi (and maybe about Yuusaku und Toichi as rivals).

Wow. This is hilarious and heartbreaking all at once. This is definitely going into my Favorites. I'm now going to try to point out any grammar errors I can find so that this fic can be made even more perfect. I'm not entirely sure that they're all errors though, as I'm not an English major.:

"When the doctor tried to stop him from going into the room where his wife was giving birth in, Toichi set off a few smoke bombs, picked the lock, got in, handcuffed himself to the heaviest equipment there and threw the key outside the window." I think that you don't need "in" after "birth", and that you should have a comma as follows, "there, and threw the key outside the window."

"She was too good to actually risk her face being shown until her horror makeup was off her face, but the split second glance he received of her profile was enough to keep him on her trail." I don't think that you need the 2nd "her face" here. Maybe you could say, "until her horror makeup was removed" or something like that if you want to be more clear?

"Chikage received eternal loyalties from Jii when she commented positively on his devotion to Toichi." "Loyalties" should be "loyalty" here. Jii is only one person.

"Just how did one say that their first kiss together had been shared while hurtling from a tower with a motorcycle chained to their wrist in Paris?" I think it should be "their wrists" here because there are 2 people chained to the motorcycle.

"Chikage pushed back her hair, and then squealed as she was tackled by a loving magician." You don't need the comma here. Sorry about how I'm listing all the comma corrections instead of just stating the general rule, but I love this story and want it to be as perfect as possible.

"She found out, when she first went to his house, that his jewelry box was completely empty, save two wedding bands." I don't think that you need the first 2 commas here.

"There was a bit of confusion until Toichi snapped his fingers and not only pulled out a huge bouquet of flowers from nowhere, but made the ceiling rain with flowers." I think that you either need to remove the comma or add another one as follows, "and, not only".

"When asked about it, both burst into hysterical laughter, and avoided the question with smiles of mischief and whispers of secrets." I don't think that the second comma is necessary.

"She kept her Poker Face as the woman who was light-hearted, carefree, and childish after his death, because the audience couldn't know that the Disney princess was actually the deep and heartbroken woman." You don't need the comma before "because" here.

"Yusaku never told anyone when one day, KID just popped out of the shadows in the washroom at his favorite restaurant to ask him to sign a book of his, and make it out to 'the Phantom Lady'." I think that you don't need the comma before "and".

"If it weren't for Kaito, she would have definitely returned, and began to steal jewels." I think that the 2nd comma isn't necessary and that it should be "begun".

Finally, are the lowercase letters in the title and summary a style issue?

Thanks for posting this!

This is so many kinds of wonderful, I can't describe it. Suffice it to say you've filled a gnawing gap in our fandom. Each snapshot is endearing. Love it, love it, love it! Thanks for sharing.

This was absolutely adorable! There aren't many Chikage and Toichi fics, and this one was just wonderful. Everyone was in character and there was a plethora of emotions throughout the whole thing that made it even better. Just beautiful.

This is amazing! Everyone's totally in character, and my only gripe is that I didn't quite get #44.

Oh my, I loved this. The ups and downs, the focus on Chikage that isn't commonly found sadly enough, and ooh, everything! Sorry that my review sucked, but reading this has just filled me with emotion and left me feeling giddy.

I know which case in Detective Conan forty-four is alluding to! *Squeals happily*

I loved this. So much. I've honestly never seen a Toichi/Chikage fic, and now I'm hunting for them.