Dude the war comment is going to far and Hinata actually doesn't stutter to much after the pein arc and gets better after and I think you need to see it in a different point of view. Hinata comes from a stern family and famous family with a lot pressure on her shoulders and the kumo incident and caged bird seal definitely does not help. She supposedly inherited her mother's kindness and was bullied till Naruto saved her plus don't forget Neji also belittled her every chance he got until Naruto literally beat some sense into him and kurenai while she means well did not help matters as a surrogate sister/mother role did good for Hinata as a sensei well had kurenai had more experience she could have handled her better. Hinata's clan also called her a failure a lot as well and that because of trying to PROTECT her sister who is around the same age of konohamaru from getting a that is essentially a slave seal and you are bashing her for that. Anyway Hiashi's tough love approach also did not help as Hinata responds to positive approval like good job or you were awesome, if you read the manga and watched the anime Hinata did extremely well and her stutter gets better due to postive influences with Naruto being largest. Look back on this and think wouldn't you get nervous,shy,and afraid with all of these burdens placed on you in fact I would say out of all of the konoha 12 hinata's burden is close to the same weight as Naruto's due to the fact a lot of people have large expectations of them. Anyway I thank you for your time and I hope I changed your opinion of Hinata you don't have to like just tolerate her and give her bit more respect. After all a bird of feather flock together and failure stick together to prove every one wrong.

Good story

I'm not mad just disappointed

more now its 2020 its not 2013 anymore get to work please

we want more now please

damm a cult has been made

y'know how some things are so bad but you can't help but love them anyway, this is one of those things.

I can see everything played out in my mind and the sence so instead of Susake Leaving he/She is Staying...They go on a 3 years training trip together...Deepen their Love and Justu...They made a Name together called Bule Gaze Yellow Flash.
Then the next is Red Blazing.
Came Back Susake look like Makoto and Naruto looklike Minato But With Wisker and Red Hightlight from His Mom and Kyuubi Who become thier Summon...2 years Later Naruto use His Completed Technique Called "Clone Of Death Release the Soul" Then Naruto pour all his Charka Which is Above Kage Level Then 2 Soul Came from the Sky and 1 Soul Come from a Space that tear and close they enter 1 Clone each Then stood There is 4th Hokage...Red Hot Habanero...And Makoto.
Then Danzo Root Infrom him so Danzo Ran Out and his Face is shown Happy so the 4th want to know.
So Danzo Explained why...They All Resign And Left the Village and They Travel And They Settle down in Uzu With there 2 Kid and 1 Daughter...
Then Naruto Awaken his Star Eyes Which Skip Generation...Then Naruto Went to a Seal That Release 3 Sword so the kid grab one each And Naruto Dissapper Into a Vortex And came out holding the 1st Uzu Sword...The 4th War Started which Took tge Family By Surprise and They each Went into Battle...

please update

Lol

Fangirls making men gay.

Not being rude here cause i know ur a busy person but...is this ever coming back? Its been a little over 4 years since it was uodated. Its a great story, but ive read so many goof stories that just never get finish, some not being updated since 2005. So i,m curious if this story will ever continue. Again. Not trying to be rude. U did fantastic with what is here but, well...i genuinely wanma see this get finished. If u cant then i fully understand but, again, i really hope it gets updated and finished. Its got lots of potentisl and is a great story and just needs more regular updates. Not saying ur a bad person or a terrible writer. Like i said, it just needs updated more regularly if u are going to finish it at all. Thanks.

Hail hydra

update

take your time to get things sorted out and think it through