| Reviews for Ten-Tailed Puppet Master |
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Bento-dish16 chapter 8 . 5/14 ThIsIsAgOoDbOoK |
KaijuHunter-02 chapter 11 . 3/12 WHEN NEXT CHAPTER?! |
ManticoreBlues chapter 11 . 1/21 please continue the fanfiction |
gavin chapter 1 . 1/6 i think this is awesome |
StrikerTheFallen chapter 11 . 9/28/2019 You need need NEED to get back to writing this fic plzzzz lol I went on a quest to find Puppeteer Naruto fics and I was surprised at the small amount their was and this is by far the best I've read! |
EliteShadow chapter 11 . 8/15/2019 love this story so far please update again soon! |
Guest part 2 chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 Oh and before I forgot the nibi is blue you idiot the nibi is made of blue fire not black |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 Please go back and redo this it's a good story and good concept and I like it but the whole Predacon Papa thing is annoying as s*** I don't know why it just it doesn't fit at all whatsoever but like that's not my choice you can keep them it's the part that bugs me about them is that you're incorporating them into his taijutsu style and you're not explaining how like you just suddenly right in he Sprouts These Wings for his back but you're not explaining how he's doing it you're not like oh he has this entire system of a stupidly complicated seals that he shouldn't be able to do whether or not the juubi helps them unless she herself wrote them for him on to his body and that in itself is stupidly dangerous because if it gets damaged it will more than likely blow up and f****** kill him but you're not even using that excuse to go he has all these heels on him that's interconnected so he can spread the parts of his puppets from anywhere on his body no you're just like he can do it no ifs ands or buts here just like he doesn't he doesn't and I'm not explaining how cuz f*** you that's why and the gun thing I just it annoys me it mostly annoys me because you don't give a good explanation you're just like Sasori thought it up and I bet when he eventually comes across Sasori he's not even going to be using set guns and you're not even going to give an excuse you just going to have him be just as Christ as everyone else when he starts shooting off at these weapons that are supposed to be devastating but are absolutely trash in a world where people can remove and react as fast as they can in the Naruto universe like seriously if you try to use a gun on the Raikage if you don't use some stupidly complicated one that is so many years advanced in technology and that can shoot a bullet at the speed of light or some other absurd speed she'll just dodged it and rip your f****** head off like seriously redo this and try not to do stupid garbage like it again now I'm going to continue reading your story because it's gotten to the point that all the ones with concepts that I enjoy are less then 3 pages or are so trash that I can't read them without cause self harm goodbye and fyi I'm not a coward for using a guest account I just don't Ethier comment often enough or on recently posted stories so I don't see the point especially because I did make one the forgot the password and username |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2019 No offense but the sharrinnegan is sasuke's unique eye and the eye your using is called rinne-sharingan |
deathwearsblack chapter 10 . 12/5/2018 Please update when you can. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 Nice first chapter |
theta117 chapter 11 . 10/25/2017 Two things, 1. The part, after he explained to his teammates about being a complete juubi jinchuriki, when he used that technique to run home. It reminds me of the Neon running from inFAMOUS: Second SON. 2. Did you abandone this? Its been 2 years since you updated this story, think you could get back on it? I know you have other stories, but we really need this one updated. Please update, or atleast pass it on to someone who could complete it. |
Guest chapter 11 . 9/8/2017 I hope you come back to Ten-Tailed Puppet Master & your other Naruto storied. |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/7/2017 Are you sure Sharpshooter's appearance didn't have a Clint Eastwood in "The Good, The Bad, &The Ugly" inspiration? |
heartbell chapter 10 . 8/14/2017 the judge the jury and the executioner all in one mercy or genocideD |