I really love this story so far! I hope you continue it!

Izaya is so sweet, but I suspect more happened in their relationship than friends? Or maybe it was one-sided? I think the first is more likely with what's going on here. And more importantly... Wow. Waking up from a coma just to find his precious brother has died... That's really horrible. Poor Shizuo.

His reaction to Celty having a head is cute and funny. I wonder what their reaction would be if he told them about it. Prob like, "uh huh..."

Oh my gosh, this is such good concept for a story (plot? lol I can't talk). I think I've only read something similar once before in a D. Gray Man fic. Really excited to continue reading!

I have been waiting for months.

I really am looking forward to seeing more of this soon.

Pleaseeee update soon! This sounds really good so far! I'll be waiting for the next update! It's only been 2 mo. though

pretty interesting! i would love to read more.

I feel so bad for Shizuo having to learn about Kasuka's death twice! I liked this chapter a lot cause It explained some of the dream vs reality with Celty and Shinra. Really I'm looking forward to Izaya dream vs reality that is going to be... Interesting to say the least! Thank you for the new chapter, and I'll be looking forward to the next!

Update!

So, now more into Shizuo's reality vs. his dreams.

The shock of finding that Kasuka's dead...

getting really good can't wait for more

Me gusta mucho tu fic,espero leer pronto la continuación :D
PD: perdon por escribir en español,pero mi ingles apesta!

well, nice to read you again! and just when I was to ask about Shizuo's family, that cliffhanger!

poor Shizuo finding out his brotheris dead can't wait for more

*･ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･'(*ﾟﾟ*)'･*:.｡. .｡.:*･ﾟ･* An update! I had thought this was discontinued! I'm really glad its still ongoing! I just reread the entire thing (cause like you said, it has been a while) and it reeeaaally good! I love the plot and I find Shizuo mixing up the 2 realities to be very interesting. His response to finding out that Celty does indeed have a head was hilarious. Hmm but I wonder what Celty meant when she said she had her own problems too. I hope to see more of Izaya in future chapters. I would guess that their relationship was, well, borderline relationship. Very close friends ;). Ahh that makes me happy to think about. I think your Shizuo is very in character! I can't say much about the others since this fic is very Shizu-centered. I think thats all I really have to say. Thank you for the story, and I look forward to the next chapter!

P.S. This is a review of the story up to chapter 3, but since I (apparently) already reviewed that, I'm putting it under cahpter 2