Okay, don't know whether I liked your summary or your story better ;)

I agree, there are an awful lot of post-ATY S/V reunion fics floating around, but you seem to have managed to seperate yours from most of them, at least. Your writing style is very good, and Sydney's hysterics added to the angst of the whole thing. It actually got so that, in the end, I was kind of hoping for a 'next chapter coming soon' or something like that, though the ending was just perfect-

(V) I'm alive. And I'm gonna kiss her again sometime, too.

Sigh . . .

Anyway, the point to this whole rambling review (ha, you didn't think there was one, did you?) is that I wouldn't mind a sequel at all.

hahaha. lmao. lol. Great story. I loved it. sweet. One of the best ATY reunion fics so far, in my opinion. :-D

So cute! I love how you did the Will POV, it made it really good!

Good Chapter.

ahhh... much love for the "screw protocol" vaughn... D

LOL, love the final little stab at Jack. Overall wonderful, if a little ambiguous as to what exactly Irina was doing or planning. Great character work, and way to describe without sounding wordy or forced.

Did I mention adorable? :)

K, I just have to say that I lurved the last few lines of this fic, "screw it...I'm going to kiss her again too", HEE! Rock on, Souris! )