I can't believe this is the ending. There is absolutely no closure. I hope this story really has a sequel.

It's getting exciting again, but Natsu should have been able to smell right away that Felix had been in Lucy's apartment.

I know you need to create some kind of conflict, but to me it was too OOC. Natsu and Lucy would never think of each other that badly.

Pls, if done writing then post. It hurts. I need it.

Never doubt your writing..
As time goes your writing is improved.
Even if you don't like it mow, you may have loved it when you wrote it.
But if you are gonna write it again, so I am gonna read it again too! 3
All the best!
I am not a writer so I don't really have any suggestions for you, sorry! :(

Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed it :D

I do not know what to write here soooo...
Nice.

What I thought the ending was like? Epic, awesome, amazing. Keep doing what you're doing, I LOVE it!

SHUT UP! IM NOT CRYING I JUST HAVE MAKEUP IN MY EYES...

Please write a sequel! This is probably one of the best stories i have ever read and i would love a continuation!

Please! I want to read the sequel! XD

I would love a sequel to this fanfic

ok i want sequel

Da FAQ why why end it like this

OMG! That's was cruel D': but hey, I still like what you did. Leaving it up to our own imagination.. This was a great story and I was happy to be able to read it from the beginning! Thanks for writing this!