Awesome!

That is cute, definitely! Loved it!

.AUehara

Erhmehgerd! THE FEEEEEEEEEELS! This story is amazing! :D

Oh ohhhh that was tre adorable! So sweet, I want to smush them together. And with a hint of spice, too ;) Ah, enjoyed this so much *dreamy sigh*

A loving Bunny is so cute

So hot really cute ;-)

That was so sweet. I see how Jack would have zoned out; just reading this put me in a daze.

love it must have more please

.god. fangirl screamed while reading this

oh wow. great characterization, i can really see them coming together like this. love it! so sweet without being too much.

So friken romantic, i know i can't spell.

so sweet :)

Just like...I love this. I loved the interactions between them and the dialogue, it was so well done. And that it's just so SWEET and fluffy and beautiful. I can just like read it again and again and go 'awww' each time I swear. And I loved the whole 'warm and cold' thing. And just. Ugh. Love. So much.

"'Ello love." Bunny murmured - that fullstop in the dialogue should be a commar, if you're writing something like 'he said' after dialogue it's considered the same sentence, because it's the same action, if that makes sense?

SO MUCH LOVE.

Thanks
Kivea R.

ah love! more? jk this is and as perfect! very ell written too

-commences to squeal like no tomorrow- AWWWWWWWW!