Reviews for Observant
SaberAureum chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
fuck j love this! I had a great laugh! 3
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
Hahahahaha this is so perfect like the most perfectest thing lol and Raven just knowing and smirking lolololol
DemeRain chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
Thanks for sharing.
rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
This is so cute and funny and it really made me lol. I could just see all the kids with their mouths hanging open at the end. Wonderful work.
GalaxyGirl181 chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Hehehehe I'll bet they were.
SoulMore chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
FAN!
nite.fall.29 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Your story made my day... :)
I love it..
Lord Doppy chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
this is great! i love your writing style! any more coming?
Waynny chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Great story! I love the end! xD
Red Riddle chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
This.

Is beautiful XD
BirdsOfFreedom chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Hahaha, very amusing, I couldn't stop laughing. I love Erik x Charles and this was brilliant. Thank you :D
kid chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
cute :)
alleygirl24 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Haha go Erik! That was so funny; I can picture in my head Raven's face especially. Haha. Fantastic job!
20naina12 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Hahaha, I love it!

Eric was so...Eric, yeah, that's the word ;)
eponay chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I love this. The gentle affection that you put between the two of them through humour.