Some logistics were a bit confusing like what kind of gag Danny had in his mouth and who the heck is Ace?

I just discovered this and loved it so much, and I really really would like to read more of it. Is there any chance of that happening? Also read your other story even if I don't watch the series and also loved it so...you definitely should write more, these stories are just perfect! Thank you

Need more

This story was so good! Please, please, let there be a sequel. Would love to read how this relationship started and how it evolves in the future.

This story was so good! Please, please, let there be a sequel. Would love to find out how this relationship came about and how it evolves in the future.

Soo hot. Please continue

OHHH...a friend of the navy... is great- i like the story...

This is great!

Mmmmmmm there has to be a sequel ...yes !

That was HOT, he keeps calling them boy, please tell me it isn't JOE!

This is interesting. You definitely can write. I would probably read future works by you, especially if you kept writing in the Steve/Danny pairing (my H50 OTP).

But the fact you've posted both chapters so that the entire text is formatted as centered (Having taken formal typing classes in Junior High [Middle School] & High School, I can tell by the way the text looks on the screen/"page"), instead of the usual "left-justified", is kind of awkward (& perhaps a small bit annoying/off-putting, for at least some readers who are used to the other way) & looks weird to the eye. And I might not read future works formatted like this.

Had I been your Beta (& I have extensive experience in fanfic Beta work in the previous fandom in which I read fanfic & had an OTP before I got involved with the H50 fandom/fanfic/OTPs), I honestly would've STRONGLY discouraged you from formatting it that way when posted, if the work had been presented to me like that. I get that it may be a "writer's quirk" of yours though (Or was it an accident & you forgot to change the formatting back after your Author's Notes?).

Damn that is hot! Can't wait for more!

Wow fifty shades of grey ...take a back seat...H50 shades of OMG ... whats next ?

How can you just send it like that. haha. It scared the crap out of me.

Please continue. This has started off very well.