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robert krause chapter 9 . 7/14 when his wife was in bed ,Naruto was in his home office sleeping in a cub size room his dad had used for when ,Naruto had move some stuff form his 1 and 2 houses a pack of dices ,set of playing cards all hot grils with muslces and 2 set woman with big set muslces and big size bods now, when the art now of long time foes like co and when a set was made now , Naruto sleeping now no a twin size bed now, when locking the door to it now, when reading books now and then off to sleeping now, |
robert krause chapter 8 . 7/14 when Naruto had get to the red lights for when he had buy out a old inn out and made into his offices and get a den room on the top floor and men cave too , when used the mob money now and when he siting it seeing the s-class bad guys and woman he took out and even Butcher max now kill off by him and money form it help out too get twin swords and some daggers too, when used it vs others in the west parts and when money be put away now, he had used it to doing some workings in the red lights and others parts of the vaillge he and his wife had get owner ship of , a bar queen fox nights his wife night club now, when then she had too get to sit on council meeting as he be doing it , when Naruto and his wife had seeing others before , he was busy with his clan lands now , buy out a 2 lot now ,a new clan meeting house is buy up now, used the old art Naruto find and keeping too, when the new housing is now 4 floors up and flags are up now, outside now, a office is now no the 4 floor up now, when get to doing some workings now, Naruto had meeting his wife here over clan stuff and co stuff too, when old swords form past foes on the wall now, |
StrangeHuman chapter 34 . 7/8 It's been so long and I'm still waiting for you to update. If you are not going to continue with the story, you could give the option of having someone continue it for you. It's a shame that an interesting story is discontinued for so long. |
Guest chapter 34 . 7/6 heyy continueeee the storyyyyy |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19 Wish there was more just NarutoxTemari pairings instead of always being in mostly harems I also liked The Desert Flower which was also great |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/9 why i Robert Krause had to say is why not do 2 wife s one is Ion who is blond hire and blue eyes and she had good mine and bit bossing too, as for it in time is good too, when in others stuff i seeing in ion had bit of her own ways too, |
robert krause chapter 11 . 6/9 here one of Robert Krause the fan of Naruto , Naruto had be call all of names by the others in time when had not like or love for it ,he keeping his mind on others stuff and when trying to be Hokage is sill mind with him , i Robert Krause was think of why not get him to be lord of whirlpool the lands of Kushina Uzmaki is form ,when the money of his mom and dad may be helpful in long time stuff , but form his 1 c class job Naruto if it was me i Robert Krause well get the mob money and used it for co used and buy out some lands the vaillge not used like in the red lights town ,and doing it to get the school new rooms to fin with , PS this not spam but my way showing a fan way of think of it is too , edits of Robert Krause |
robert krause chapter 10 . 6/9 why i Robert Krause ask is Naruto and his wife well used the mob money for like few co stuff like one used shop for i think of a books shop like ninjas stuff and some old art ones and some used ones too, as for toys and games too , when Naruto keeping working on body huther like took out big time bad guys and woman like and his get pay for the side show stuff too, why not let him get a cub size house to be his men cave /den bed room , she had her she shad , like he had one , when then Naruto is home now, |
robert krause chapter 15 . 6/6 when Naruto and his wife be doing some house looking for 2 house to living in when he and her find out of the red lights he and her had get the old inn house with it is the 4 floor house ,she had keeping the bed room in the back with a bath room in the back part ,and in her bed room is her queen size bed and TV and when she was sleeping off now , Naruto had keeping his office when it is his men cave bed room and books room now, old team pic on the wall now , when his pic with her now , when he keeping his side job took out s-class bad guys and woman out and money form it help out too , a old map of the whirlpool is now on the wall now and his mom and dad pic and the last is of the old men and him when he was 3 or 4 years old , when he and Sakura had workings as doing the job for when both had get into the Aube black ops and fox and sank was born and when she is cap now of 300# and his of #490 both tames had used too get fin with , |
BigDragon500 chapter 34 . 6/6 It is the best NarutoxTemari story I have read. Please I need you to come back. |
Bearmauls chapter 9 . 5/11 the couch thing kinda bothers me. Naruto is an under-trained socially isolated person. He hasn't really been shown how to properly interact with others in a healthy way. It felt like a sitcom comedy moment for Temari to throw it out here. |
Bearmauls chapter 2 . 5/11 Poor Hinata. |
Bearmauls chapter 1 . 5/11 I'm always a fan of referencing Dresden, however he was actually quoting a line from a Terry Pratchett book. Jingo, I believe. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29 How do so many people like this? Its cliche as fuck and completely unreasonable in its growth. Like naruto learns the hiraishin in a week? Bullshit |
MirageSPL chapter 34 . 4/18 It's good that this updated pretty recently. Gives me hope it hasn't been abandoned. Honestly, I didn't notice the difference with the previous chapter so you blended it quite well with just going with what you remember and the content from the previous chapters. Hopefully, you'll be able to continue this sooner rather than later. I've read this quite a long while ago and just re-read this again. It's quite a good story; one that I'd like to see finished. Good luck! |