so cool!

I really like it! :D

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Too lazy to write normal review! #1

Would she be better off?

A devil you know vs the one you don't situation?

What a misfortunate set of circumstances to befall our heroine.

Best to roll with it for now.

Aww.

Well why else would she do that Hidan?
:P
There's a reason you're called an idiot...

Ugh. Even jumping off a waterfall to lose them hoping for the best would be a challenge.
Would need them to be occupied with something else.

Ouch crap luck.

Couldn't be helped I guess...

I loved this, as always! I'm glad you updated :) As far as I could tell, I didn't find any mistakes either.

I love how she's so unfit compared to them, keeps things realistic.

God that old guy was freaking creepy. I really liked how you wrote the whole 'not for sale' bit, and this: [She couldn't help but chance a nervous look back before the door shut completely, catching a glimpse of the man before she left. She swore his eyes glowed in the darkness.]

I'm very interested in this: [A flash of red hair danced in front of her minds' eye, but she chased it away with a shake of her head. That person was far from reach, both physically and emotionally. No use dwelling on something you can't change.] Can't wait to find out more about this mysterious red-head!

This was a short chapter but a good one! It had Sora and the Zombie Bros interacting which is what we needed to see. I especially liked the end bit: [Sora struggled to her feet, eyes lingering on water so close, yet so far away. Then she limped back to the men who were, surprisingly, waiting.] The 'surprisingly, waiting' bit shows the small promise of a not so cold relationship with her captors in the future.

Well done on another great chappy, I look forward to the next one!

cool chapter!
the vision before gave away the bounty exchange and now she knows what kakuzu does.
what happened to the shack? was it a cloaking device? or genjutsu?
update again quickly please!