Love it! I love seeing Darien so jealous. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Please update soon!

please update

Serena could ask the silver crystal to remove her memories of Darien or maybe she could go back to the Moon?

Maybe Serena will go back to the Moon?

I wonder if Serena will return to the Moon or ask the silver crystal to remove her memories of Darien?

I really like Jason and serena interaction. Hope you'll continue this fic

Good chapter even though run I can be a brat

I like jason

I lije thatbserena not begging Darien back that jerk

This story is pretty cool. I really like Jason and want so bad for his and Serena relationship to develop. It would be so cute and Darien soooooo deserves it! He's been too mean to Serena and needs a reality check. Update soon!

Thank you for uploading this! I'm glad you are going a more mature and realistic direction of Serena. Often, in most Serena/Darien breakup fics, Serena is spending a majority of the time moping and Darien is being an ass to to her, then it's either she falls immediately into the arms of another man, with the lack of development between the two,she goes back to Darien 2-3 chapters in while the fic either 10-20 chapters long, with Darien learning absolutely NOTHING, and the scouts are continuously shutting down her development while gradually developing worse.

This fic shows a believable route for Serena's growing relationship with Jason as a potential love interest. I really like Jason too. He has a personality and is depicted as a regular teenager instead of some prince charming type as seen in a lot of other fics. I'm excited for their development. Go Serena! Get that haircut!

That being said, I'm actually excited for Darien's development. He was such an ass in the 90s anime, I like him better in the manga and SM Crystal. I don't want him groveling, but he needs accept Serena a young woman who is figuring herself out, the includes testing the waters with other guys. He needs to see how big of a prick he is.

Update a soon as you can!

Ok, I'm new to this story, and I don't generally review Sailor Moon fanfics, but in this one instance, I'm making an exception.

Wow, compared to how she acted in the anime, I'm really liking this new incarnation of Serena. She's standing her ground, no matter how much she's hurting. And kudos to the Scouts for having her back in this. Really like the idea of Jason being her new choice. At the moment, I think he's going to be better for her than Darien could ever hope to be. Generally, I don't rock cannon couple boats, but after the way Darien has been treating her, I think she deserves someone better. Gotta ask, did King Endymion really NOT think something like this could happen when he came up with this "grand scheme"? (Insert sarcasm)

The only problem I really have is the fact that Serena's not standing up to the Scouts when it comes to drooling over boys. Seriously, these girls are supposed to be princesses, and this is how they behave on a daily basis? Yeah, sorry, but those girls need a wake up call and a reality check.

Overall, good thought line. Really like it. Thought about this scenario myself a few times. Glad to see someone decided to do it.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Yeahhhh another chapter in a longggg time

I hate darien he so mean. And rini so horrible to her. I hooe serena ad jas get together