I cannot even put into words how much I love this! It has all the elements of a good Jisbon ficJane doing something he shouldn't do, Lisbon being (seemingly) oblivious, and a good, witty twist at the end! Good job!

oh so sweet thanks for the read

"But he had left a chocolate bar on her desk for her."
For some reason that sentence made me want to bawl.

Awe, loved it!

I was very surprised at how much I liked this! I thought it was just going to be a little funny piece to pass my time but it turned out to me an interesting and captivation short story that had be giggling with anticipation the whole way through. Great job, I loved it!

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Great story, I loved the end - not only were you teasing Jane but you made me smile! :D

Hahaha! That was great, totally Jane being a creeper and getting busted for it. Nice work.
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You are just such a wonderful lil stinker! I adored this; your Lisbon's one-up on Jane was priceless. And on behalf of that (very small, I assure you...) side of myself had carefully followed your A/N instructions and set aside Lisbon's brazen forwardness in keen anticipation (alright, almost as surely as your Jane) of sweaty lovins, I want to thank you for compassionately providing hope that at least poor bumfuzzeled Jane will eventually get some, even if I don't ; } Thanks, as always, for all the great fun!

This was brilliant! I loved the little twist at the end. Lara :)

Really really enjoyed this :)

This was amazing! I love it :D

This was fun. I love how Lisbon has him bumfuzzled.

I loved this! I didn't expect it, but it makes sense that Lisbon would have noticed Jane during her runs in the park, seeing that she's a cop and has acute observation skills. I loved that Jane was rendered speechless - now that is something we rarely see!

Um. You had me at the summary. Love stalker Jane and his fascination with Lisbon's legs. Also love Lisbon tricking him into running with her at the end. The whole story was a wonderful indulgence. Thank you for writing!