Everything that is happening is rather confusing. Especially right after the mission is announced.

Lovely

This would work if it started with plan in mind but it quickly devolved it a mess. I mean the star wars cross came way left field. But it did keep me reading to see what thesecrets" were, but not any more. Sorry

I read till here and MAN! This is awful. Nothing makes sense, everything is jumbled, plot became boring and without sense, it's all basically a mess. A huge mess. The idea was good (not all that unique but still) but the excution and plot of the story made it awful. Sorry, but I don't think I can compete a story like this. I do hope for the best to you tho. Have a nice day.

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

TF was reading cuz it was cool and confusing

Omg. Please come back and update this awesome story soon.

I didnt even read your story. Hell I didnt even open it at all. I read the comments and judging how these comments are saying your story is 100% completely awful, I think I dont wanna read it. The only thing I can say is this: Either make a stories that make complete logical sense, or dont make stories at all. Good luck for your future stories though.

isnt akane kyuubi?

that was good keep the chapters coming

13 and he's 2m tall... what is he? A murasakibara?

continues the story

Story is awful. Please I hope you have gotten better at righting. Not only does this have major plot holes. Horrible planning. And complete idiocy. Please fucking hell... Make the cringe stop

Awesome story so far. I LOVE IT!

You've completely lost me...