un peu trop d'ilya, tous les autres sont très inutiles dans votre fiction, j'aurais aimé que mon personnage préféré de HP soit severus ne soit pas un fantoche, l'univers d'HP n'a l'air de servir que de décors, dommage j'aimais bien le début mais je stoppe là!

Hola! Este era un buen fanfic, es una lastima que lo no hallas continuado. Tenían mucho potencial

Please continue this story and update soon!

es un buen fic, trata de continuarlo

actualiza amigo, este fic es bueno sin tener a Severus persiguiendo a Lily

Amigo nos dejaste con una gran historia, trata de continuarla

gracias x todos los cap

I'm want it more

Update pls

...using false accusations of assault and rape as a form of humor is gonna be a hard no from me. Doubly so when it's not even in character. I'm out.

illya should have prana/mana near infinite

what too fast for romance

using the churches "spells' do not use magic nor need magic to cast.

So why couldnt the priest have dealt with the ghost?

should do an omake about the scenerio if what they had not been drugged with the drought.

kinda makes sense. given the fact that the marauders do harass snape.. it could be viewed as yaoi tension. add the fact that harry was obssessed with cedric and draco.

well at least she did not impale them with swords so nothing actually illegal so far.

ahah dumbles realizing what his inattentiveness has cost him.

poor alice. well at least she wasn't in huffelpuff to begin with.

oh oh .