Well that must of been a scandalous smile

love it!

that was so fucking good!

this was actually really funny and cute. i hope you make a whole series around the rest of the sins because these last two were great.

holy shit.

this chapter was great.

2 down 5 to go?

I love the ending... so cute!

Nicely done! I like how Zuko clearly doesn't know what to do with himself after his encouter with Katara. Inexperienced!Zuko seems more realistic to me. I think it was his laserbeam like focus on "capturing the Avatar" and his severe lack of people skills in books 1 though 3. I doubt he had the inclination or wherewithal to meet very many girls during his years in exile. Also, all Uncle Iroh references/scenes were quite humorous in this. I hope your next installment is a continuation of this universe.

This chapter is the perfect combination of fluff and smut! I cannot wait until the next chapter's up!

I would say this was "cute," but that's hardly the appropriate adjective for smut. Lots of UNF though.