I love this story so much! Your portrayal of the characters and plot is absolutely amazing, and I love the idea the story presents. Please don't abandon this story! (That was quite the cliffhanger, plus we haven't even seen our beloved couple share a single kiss yet! *Mock pouts*) I know its been three years since you last updated this, but PLEASE don't give up on it!

Hi

Why haven't you carried this on? It is amazing! Please return to it. You are a really good writer.

Emma's conversation with Ruby was interesting. I feel as though Ruby knew a lot more about Hook than she was sharing. Maybe she does. So Hook is in town. Emma will have fun with that!

Well this is fantastic! :) I felt like giggling when you included the little details of 5 hours to sleep - to which we can relate so well... ;) - and the last thought about milk. Might be the best scene in this chapter for me:)
It's so good that you're consistent. It doesn't get cold out of the blue and after a while that cold even adds to the story a warm touch; you're not forgetting family context, „dropped” milk, or appointments; you're considering how the actual person would feel in those circumstances; you're not concentrating on romance - still, the love story is exhilarating:) You manage to balance all this and keep it very INTERESTING.
Some quality writing, milady!

I can only wow on how SPOT ON this is! Intriguing, too;) Thanks again! :)

This is really good! I really love how you write about everyday life in Storybrooke, i can almost see it- it's so real. It's likable. It's the life we know from series:) The characters come to life.
I'm thrilled to see all those little, particular details- such as the clock on the back of the wall as Emma pushes the doors backwards. How cool is that?!
Her and Ruby's dialouge is so enjoyable, girltalk fun! :) Ruby's great.
And I like your take on Emma's afterimpressions about Killian-I mean, Hook- it seems very likely that her rection could be just that.
All in all, thanks! :) Now, on to chapter 2! ;)

Update please!

Enjoying this so far! Pretty well written and more interesting than the rest of the Killian/Emma stories I have come across thus far :)

This is soooooo amazing! Please write more!

Please hurry up with the ending

WHAT NEXT!

Hellooooooo! I just was scrolling along and found this story, and I must say I love it! Please write more

QOS

Loved the story, and your writing style! Do you have any more coming? : )

Oh my goodness, I've been reading for the past hour starting from where I left off last night (when I also read for an hour) and I thought this was a completed story but's it's not done yet and I don't know what to do now! :'D PLEASE update soon this is so amazing!