hey i really like this story so far!
i've been thinking about doing a FFX from Yuna's pov
i hope you keep up the hard work!

This story is great so far. The only thing that bothers me is lack of focus on combat. But everything else is great. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This chapter was good, and I liked the whole scene at the beginning of the clumsy exchange about Tidus being her guardian; I liked that it was so important to her that she got teary eyed. I also liked their little conversation afterwards.

Good going, happy [Early] new year!

I hope you had fun at Disneyland!

Wow! Another awesome chapter! I loved a lot of things about this:
Yuna being conscience stricken by sending the dead, and the fact that they could speak to her, it made me sad that there were those who wanted to stay to care for their children.
Haha, I smiled when she *had* to perform the kiss of life on Tidus. It's too bad he didn't wake up in the middle. ;)
I'm curious about what the silver pathway is, but I'm sure I'll find out soon enough.
I also *loved* the twist about Tidus needing to stay away from sendings! (I can imagine a bit were this is going, but time will tell exactly what the implications are.)

Anyway, GRRREAT! Keep it up!

(I wish I had thought of the Yuna feeling sorry for sending the souls thing! It's such a great twist!)

TidusxYuna Always

Another great chapter! I don't have much time this morning, but I'll just say there where more of your great lines, and I have favorite-ed your story, cause it is becoming clear that you are a great writer!

Keep it going, but don't pressure yourself to go too fast, if that's what you're doing, cause then you might burn out.

(I must say, though, I do enjoy these fast updates!)

TidusxYuna Always

This is a great chapter! What stood out to me the most were several really good lines, I liked the thought, "Daddy, why did you have to die?" It pulled my heart strings. I also liked the line, "Nobody else volunteered their life."
It's already clear that although many people have done this story before, your is unique. Your Yuna is more...sarcastic, but still loving and self-sacrificial. Also, I like the idea that only Tidus listens, and *nobody* else does.

One pointer, you should probably put some kind of divider between "scene changes", cause it's confusing, otherwise.

So, good work! Keep it up!

TidusxYuna Always

Hello!

This is really great, TOTALLY covers all of Yuna's emotions! It is a bit of a ramble, but it is very thorough, which I *LOVE*. Your use of punctuation is great, sometimes the periods are a bit much, but I love using lots of periods to get the flat facts across with the emotions of the character who's thinking. Very good!

Keep it up!

(I hope you don't mind constructive criticism, I love to try to point out things for authors, I want everyone to have as great as possible a time on fanfiction, authors and readers.)

So, I'll keep reviewing, thanks for reviewing my stories!

I never thought I'd say this, but thanks for not reading my pilgrimage story. It's so considerate of you, since you're writing yours. I know it would be hard to not accidentally let another story color your own.

TidusxYuna Always